for: oceansex

Aug 27, 2010 16:06

From: rosalui
Title: And Time Runs Out
Rating: PG-15
Summary: War is on the horizon for Konoha and its allies, and the very idea of what it means to be a ninja is being threatened. But Naruto has never been one to surrender, and for both their sakes, Sasuke finds it’s time to lay his demons to rest.
Warnings: Violence, language, smexing, and ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: pg-15, submission: fic

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aamyra August 27 2010, 21:02:03 UTC
Holy flying fish. That was, simply put, fucktastic.

I love you, I love that I can recognize your writing style. Your stories, they’re NEVER deprived of an incredible, solid plot. Always, more than often, very action-packed, and god, you NEVER ceased to amaze me. Every goddamn time. God, I’m so proud of you.

I honestly, from the bottom of my heart, don’t get how you can write this amazingly even when you started it -very-- last minute. I mean. Seriously? You’re mental, woman!

On to the story. First of all, can I say that your Naruto made a superb Hokage! I’m so proud of him. I really could see Naruto being all epic and wise and mature yet still retained his never ending Narutoness. I guess that tends to happen when you add up Naruto and all those years together. Seriously though.

And Sasuke. Aw man, I don’t get how perfectly well you could put him together like that. I just don’t get it. It’s bizarre. Not to mention the very direct and matter-of-fact way of telling the whole world (especially Naruto) where he stood (in terms of loyalty). Despite the uh, very emotionless way of expressing them. In other words: He doesn’t give a fuck, but his own opinion can go fuck itself because Naruto cares, and that is what matters. Naruto matters.

Dude. That’s made of WIN.

It’s so believable. The fact that everything was believable made this story so good.

And this: "How the hell did this happen to us now? Tonight, in the middle of all… this, when the damn world is ending.”

Sasuke snorted. "It’s us. When else would it happen?"

Exactly. Ah, I just love the solid trust they have for each other, the utter loyalty despite the ever present anxiousness and insecurities Naruto showed in the story, I mean, it’s only understandable.

The little bits of Kakashi, Shikamaru, and Lee were awesome too. Especially Kakashi.Oh, and not to mention the other kages. Have I told you how big a Gaara fan I am? Well, yeah, I am.

Yeah, I don’t know what else to say except for, again, how amazing the whole thing was, and how proud I am of you. And your sexy voice. And.. yeah. Hahahahahaha. Okay, okay.

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aamyra August 27 2010, 21:05:42 UTC
I, too, forgot to mention how much I adore that coverpic!

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rosalui September 5 2010, 16:13:12 UTC
*holy fish fly left and right in fits of exuberance*

I have no idea how people recognize my stories, but thank you, lol!

I wrote this in like a week. ._. Came up with the plot like three days before the deadline, and then handed it in WAY late. Ask Imaan. It was crap before I re-edited it. D8

I AM A BIG GAARA FAN TOO. THERE IS MUCH TO LOVE ABOUT HIM! *says it in my ~sexy voice~*

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aamyra September 5 2010, 17:27:43 UTC
Baby I love you, I do!

<33333333333333333

We're like, Gaara's bitches or something LOL. Victims of his sexiness. Yum yum.

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