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Aug 27, 2010 16:06

From: rosalui
Title: And Time Runs Out
Rating: PG-15
Summary: War is on the horizon for Konoha and its allies, and the very idea of what it means to be a ninja is being threatened. But Naruto has never been one to surrender, and for both their sakes, Sasuke finds it’s time to lay his demons to rest.
Warnings: Violence, language, smexing, and ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: pg-15, submission: fic

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sowell August 27 2010, 16:51:54 UTC
Oh, I TOTALLY know who you are, and this was as brilliant as expected. The premise was so intriguing, and for such a complicated idea it was really well executed. I loved how fast-paced the plot was. Even if it hadn't been a SasuNaru fic, I would have been glued to my screen.

Both boys were so perfectly in character, and I loved all their interactions. I honestly wish they'd make this into a movie or something, if only so I could see the five kages fighting together. I think my favorite part was the fight between Lee and Sasuke, though. And the betting!

There are a million lines I want to quote back at you, but I especially loved:

Not gonna think about who, not jealous, not thinking about it, not gonna - Suigetsu is going back on the missing nin list, that fucker.

Ahahaha

I bet that’s why Kakashi still wears his mask. He wants to take it off, but he’s got a really dumb tan line.

Best mask theory I've heard yet lol

The doors slammed open. There was a gust of wind, and a blur of vibrant green. "YOU FORGET," boomed Maito Gai, planting himself in the center of the room and striking a victorious pose. "WE NINJA ARE VERY SUBTLE."

YES. I LOVE YOU GAI.

This was such a great read, thanks!

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rosalui September 5 2010, 16:09:24 UTC
I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW EVERYONE SEEMS TO KNOW WHO I AM. D8

But thank you. :3 Any time you comment, I feel like dancing. I love you and your writing so much, I cannot even. :')

I LOVE GAI TOO. *_* THERE IS SO MUCH TO LOVE ABOUT HIM. ♥

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