HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

New This Month! Please Read:
This Post is for BOTH Pro and Con crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support

Comments

[askedtobe]

Player Name: Zo
Character Name: Peter Petrelli
Character Journal: askedtobe
Character Canon Source: Heroes

Character Name: Angel
Character Journal: slipperysoul
Character Canon Source: Angel: the Series

[longaevus]

I love your characterisation and stuff. I've seen Peter's around before and they haven't really hit me like yours has, you're fantastic with him and I'd love to score some Helen CR with him? ♥

As for Angel, I need to tag you back and read more but so far me likey!

And you: you're a sweetheart and fun to talk to and so lovely and I want more Zo in my life ♥

[slipperysoul]

ajsdkl;fajds ♥ thank you lovely, I so appreciate it and BB YES, we can have all the more Helen CR with Peter. I think I... must have missed her post gdi BUT THE NEXT CHANCE I GET? ALL OVER IT. I've probably missed the opportunity to backtag you with it by now but i'll keep my eyes open for the next post with you make with her.

DON'T EVEN WORRY i'm still being really slow and terrified with him, so take all the time you need lmao while i.. take forever on his tags o___o

;;; ty bb THERE WILL BE MOAR ♥

[longaevus]

Backtags are totally chill but you can wait for a new one :D I plan on one... about something... ideas will come. :D

♥ I might tag some shit up after my shower STARTING WITH YOUUUUUU

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[mentis_reae]

Player Name: Hope
Character Name: Miles Edgeworth
Character Journal: mentis_reae
Character Canon Source: Ace Attorney

Character Name: Dolph
Character Journal: not_lundgren
Character Canon Source: Suikoden V

[serratedwings]

TSUUUUUUUUUUUNWORTH no, but seriously -- I'm constantly impressed with your characterization and the amount of IC... involvement, for lack of a better term, that Edgeworth manages to keep up. And, well, given that he's Edgeworth, it makes complete sense that he'd be a very central character within the Newcomer community, and I love how you've integrated him into his new situation.

Also his tsun crochety awkwardness is very fun to play with. :3c

[proxysearch]

Hope Hope Hope Hope Hope you are always amazing for keeping up with so many diverse plots that Edgeworth's in. Your voicing is really wonderful and I'm always floored with your log tags and the thought you put into them.

Dolph, while new, definitely gave me a creeper vibe the other day when I saw him on someone's post. He was both polite and somewhat intruding and I could definitely see a quiet manipulation going on. If that was what you were going for, then keep up the good work! I would just like to see more of him.

[beenwaitinglong]

Hope, your Edgeworth is one of the consistent joys I get out of this game. He's absolutely wonderful and you work so hard with him. I love his and Diegodot's awkward buddy cop friendship and I've had so much fun working on the AGI stuff with you.

I hope there'll be much more of the two of them in the future!

[gaveherwings]

Player Name:Kelly

Character Name: Daedalus Yumeno
Character Journal: gaveherwings
Character Canon Source: Ergo Proxy

Character Name: Replica Riku (Joe Fieldman)
Character Journal: madeinoblivion
Character Canon Source: Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories

[proxysearch]

Pffft. You know how I feel about your playing. I think my only crit is that I'd like to see Joe forming more close bonds with people out of cast but I also know he's a casual commenter and doesn't always lay it on thick to get people to confide in him. So that's okay.

Daedalus is, as always, spot on and really well done. I'd like to see him involved in some new plot but I've got...nothing for you. Maybe by the end of this month/beginning of next we'll be seeing some new things from the EP cast as a whole.

[madeinoblivion]

Yeah, Joe is not really the confidant type, but he could definitely use a bit more depth in his relationships as a whole, and that's something I'll be trying to work on!

Daedalus is...fairly 'episodic', as far as activity goes- he's a support character who is often playing secondhand participant, and in the long term I don't like to keep him too plot-committed specifically so he'll be available for people to go to for doctory-things whenever, but if there is opportunity for relative plot that will take his development in a new direction, I will aim to snap it up!

[beenwaitinglong]

I love playing with you more and more, Kelly. <3 I'd love to do something beyond the usual doctor-patient scope with Diegodot and Dae (not like that) but I don't know quite what yet... I suppose it will come to us!

[controllingluck]

Player Name: Tori

Character Name: Claudio Kilgannon
Character Journal: thecrowingtobe
Character Canon Source: The Amory Wars

Character Name: Himawari Kunogi
Character Journal: controllingluck
Character Canon Source: xxxHolic

Character Name: Nami
Character Journal: namiwasheretoo
Character Canon Source: One Piece

Character Name: Chouji Akimichi
Character Journal: onchubbywings
Character Canon Source: Naruto

[proxysearch]

I know you've been out and busy and so I won't crit you on activity. It's been a stressful month for you.

I can only really comment on Himawari because I've seen her around a little, but she's really a pleasure to have in game. I feel like she's right up there with Ahiru in terms of commenting to people's posts when they need a listening ear and I do enjoy reading her threads.

[controllingluck]

Yeah, the last few months have been... insane. I expected at least one "Be more active" in here somewhere really. I'm hoping to turn that around very soon.

And thank you! I've been trying to hit her up with people as much as i can. She's very easy to play and is curious and chatty, so it makes it easy to tag people. I keep meaning to work on her, to give out more of her depth and her past stuff, but she just gets chatty and friendly so i stick with that lol. Thank you though, I do have some trouble on my side of things, wondering if she's been worth keeping around or not. I tend to end up going "But i really love her" over "Hnnn, why?" so she stays in play... but i flip flop on her a lot. If that makes sense?

[topslug]

I've only threaded with Chouji and Himawari before, but I've really enjoyed the threads I had with them. ♥ I know things have been busy for you, but I'm always up for backtagging, so feel free to hit me up with any of your dudes whenever.

[beenwaitinglong]

Player Name: GG

Character Name: Diego Armando / Godot
Character Journal: beenwaitinglong
Character Canon Source: Ace Attorney

Character Name: Raphael Sorel
Character Journal: draculalite
Character Canon Source: Soul Calibur

Character Name: Sissel
Character Journal: 1800deadguy
Character Canon Source: Ghost Trick

Character Name: Wolf (alias: Warren Wolfson)
Character Journal: sheepworrying
Character Canon Source: The 10th Kingdom

[proxysearch]

GG, dearie, this game just wouldn't be the same without you. All of your characters are diverse, solid, and I'm always pleased to see them around. Diego this past month, during the plot, was extra wonderful and I can't tell you how much he makes me smile. You really have his voicing down.

I want to see more of Wolf and Raphael, but I've seen Wolf comment on a few things already. (Speaking of, I adored his thread with Bigby.)

[beenwaitinglong]

Awww, thank you bb. <3

[alwaysforhim]

You know how much I love Godot, but man, I want to compliment you on Wolf. We've only had one thread between him and Jack (I WISH FOR MORE DEAR GOD), but he's so interesting and engaging, and I'm fascinating to learn more about him and see how he's doing in the city.