HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

Jul 16, 2011 00:25

New This Month! Please Read:
This Post is for BOTH Pro and Con crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support ( Read more... )

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cruelwonder July 16 2011, 07:29:25 UTC
Player Name: Kal
Character Name: Riku
Character Journal: walkthedawn
Character Canon Source: Kingdom Hearts

Character Name: Re-l Mayer
Character Journal: proxysearch
Character Canon Source: Ergo Proxy

Character Name: Alice Liddell
Character Journal: cruelwonder
Character Canon Source: American McGee's Alice

Note: All of them have anon-enabled HMDs if you'd prefer. I know Riku's activity's been spotty. I'm kind of run down and out of ideas for him.

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he_is_wild July 16 2011, 18:01:50 UTC
I still greatly enjoy my CR with Re-l. It's so complex and unexpected and she's still so complex and interesting! Thank you for still putting up with me.

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proxysearch July 17 2011, 02:41:50 UTC
Thank you, dearie, for putting up with me.

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deceptive_lulz July 16 2011, 18:36:13 UTC
I just wanted to say that I'm already loving the interactions between Alice and LB so far! I really don't know anything about her canon, apart from what I've read in Plurk, but she seems like such a fascinating character! I really look forward to seeing how she develops in SP!

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he_is_wild July 16 2011, 07:30:00 UTC
Player Name: Psi Yamaneko
Character Name: The Joker
Character Journal: he_is_wild
Character Canon Source: DC Comics

I know I've been kind of spacey and not around as much this month. I've been under some stress. I'm okay! It's not a bad stress, just work-related stress. Anyway, it will pass, and I've started doing more canon review again.

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cruelwonder July 16 2011, 23:33:07 UTC
Your Joker is truly a joy to play with. He's sly and he's zany and he's just the right amount of hilarious and creepy to make his threads really top-notch.

You think all of your plots through, you're very open to changing things around, and you are, above all, one of the most accommodating people here and I have to thank you for that. You really are a pleasure to roleplay with, Psi, and I hope you know that.

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alwaysforhim July 17 2011, 00:52:13 UTC
Everything Kal said, man. We don't play together very much, but I always stalk the Joker, because he's just so hilarious and interesting. You know him, and I feel like I could ask you anything about him and you would automatically know the answer. Plus, OOC, you're always so kind and a pleasure to talk to, and goddamn, never change.

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mentis_reae July 17 2011, 22:53:05 UTC
It really is too bad you've been around less, because you really are absolutely wonderful. Playing with you is a complete joy and never, ever boring. I'm looking forward to being able to thread with you once again, hopefully in the very near future!

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yamatopetals July 16 2011, 07:32:18 UTC
Player Name: Mimi
Character Name: Iris
Character Journal: yamatopetals
Character Canon Source: Ace Attorney

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mentis_reae July 16 2011, 17:31:17 UTC
I am adoring your Iris so far. She's wonderfully in character, and I'm so excited to see how she develops. Her dynamic with Dahlia is especially fascinating...Keep it up, darling; I cannot wait to stalk you unto the end of time.

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yamatopetals July 17 2011, 00:20:26 UTC
asdghasdga thank you so much ;A;! I'm really excited to see how she develops too... she's so funny, at the end of the third game it's like she's on the tail end of just having made a huge step forward in character development while still being so impressionable and full of potential for growth... asdghas I could just ramble forever.

SO THANK YOU, you make my heart... go doki doki ♥ /shot

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cruelwonder July 16 2011, 23:34:19 UTC
I haven't played with Iris but I am a fan of AA and I think you're doing a wonderful job. She's not a pushover and she's not a wibble-face like I've seen some interpretations. Her threads with Diego and Dahlia were downright perfect, actually, so I just want you to know that you're doing amazingly.

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kingofrooks July 16 2011, 07:33:40 UTC
Player Name: Dream
Character Name: Bruce Wayne | Batman | Matches Malone
Character Journal: kingofrooks
Character Canon Source: DC Comics

He has anon-enabled HMD in his journal, so you can hit that up, if that's what you prefer! Please tell me if he's getting too obnoxiously everywhere, or not everywhere enough!!!!

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he_is_wild July 16 2011, 07:52:21 UTC
I love seeing Batty around, myself! I think it's great that you've gotten so involved in the game. And I still have lots of fun bouncing off him, even when he's just scowling silently. I know his silence re: Joker is something you worry about sometimes but it doesn't bother me at all because that's how it is.

I also like that you don't pull any punches with...well....how batty Batty can be.

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mentis_reae July 16 2011, 17:49:26 UTC
HITTING THIS UP EARLY BEFORE YOU GET BURIED IN LOOOVE :3

Anyway, Dreamy! I absolutely adore your characterization, and I adore the love and care with which you treat your character. Characters, I should say, since you have an equal level of thought put into each of his three personae. But I think I've been over all that before, so I should mention too just how much I admire your generosity as an RPer. You're always coming up with plots - and not plots for yourself, but for others. That's so kind on so many levels - you contribute so much to the game, really help it move forward and develop, and you contribute so much to other people, too.

Thanks for being you, and thanks for being awesome, darling. ♥ I simply cannot wait for the next time we have a plot together.

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cruelwonder July 16 2011, 23:35:47 UTC
Dream, you are lovely to play with and your Batman is... I can't even tell you how wonderful he is. He's up in everyone's business, he's paranoid and caring while still playing the aggressive knight of the darkness. It's a balance between all three of your characters but I truly enjoy reading every single one of the threads I manage to find of him. And you tag EVERYONE, and that's a feat in and of itself.

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showbizpanache July 16 2011, 07:33:49 UTC
Player Name: Candice

Character Name: Sasuke Uchiha
Character Journal: revengeisbitter
Character Canon Source: Naruto
[inb4 DO MORE STUFF WITH HIM I know man. :c I'm tryin']

Character Name: Kurt Hummel
Character Journal: showbizpanache
Character Canon Source: Glee

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longaevus July 16 2011, 19:22:44 UTC
I have nothing other than your Kurt is fabulous, especially when threading with Blaine - I *have* to read things, and I'd love CR with him with Helen? :D

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showbizpanache July 19 2011, 04:40:52 UTC
I'd love that too! I'm sure we can work something out. Thanks so much C:

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cruelwonder July 16 2011, 23:38:41 UTC
Loving on Kurt so much right now. I'm glad he and Alice are clicking well and I'm looking forward to playing with you in the future. I'd love to see Sasuke around more but you recognize that, so that's not really worth mentioning. <3

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