HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

New This Month! Please Read:
This Post is for BOTH Pro and Con crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support

Comments

[caveatwalls]

Player Name: Erin
Character Name: Sherlock Holmes
Character Journal: caveatwalls
Character Canon Source: BBC's Sherlock

Open for any and all feedback, guys :]

[enigmaestro]

Oh, I'm still absolutely loving your Sherlock! He's so sharp and delightful! It's great playing off him.

[caveatwalls]

eee thank you <3

Meanwhile I'm stalking Eddie's thread with Jim. Forever.

[calm_tempest]

Player Name: Misty

Character Name: Hitsugaya Toushirou
Character Journal: icy_heavens
Character Canon Source: Bleach

Character Name: Son Gohan
Character Journal: hybrid_prodigy
Character Canon Source: Dragonball Z

Character Name: Unohana Retsu
Character Journal: calm_tempest
Character Canon Source: Bleach

[mentis_reae]

I just want to stop by to say that I absolutely adore your characters, especially Unohana. She's wonderfully graceful and intelligent and just a pleasure to interact with. Keep on with it!

[madeinoblivion]

I really love Hitsugaya's newsfeed reactions that I catch now and then in passing, and Gohan- I think I'd like to see him with a bit more active presence among the younger crowd, since he has such an outgoing personality.

Retsu's also quite lovely, her calm outlook is well-placed, and I think I'd like to see her in a few more out of cast mentory-type relationships, as something of an advisory figure.

[phaseshifts]

Player Name: Senri

Character Name: Rin Asano
Character Journal: payback
Character Canon Source: Blade of the Immortal

Character Name: Tyki Mikk
Character Journal: phaseshifts
Character Canon Source: D.Gray-man

* Both characters have anon-enabled HMDs with IP logging off in their journals if that is what you would prefer.

[mentis_reae]

SENRI SENRI SENRI. You are a delight on so many levels. You're an excellent friend, a skilled writer, and an awesome RPer. I adore you for how brave you are as a writer and an RPer - your decisions, both in characterization and in writing style, are always so interesting and frequently surprising, and that makes your stuff so damn awesome to read. Your characters never become stagnant or boring, and I admire that so damn much

[senri]

H-haha Hope I really am so happy to hear that ;w; especially as it's been like three years of CR with each other, I am glad that my characters are not boring and my writing style is still interesting. The same to you, you know? (Though I guess I should put that back in your thread-!)

Although fff um... thank you for the crit on that, as being hard to respond to is not... something I want to do. x_x I know both Tyki and Rin tend to become deliberately obtuse and difficult when they do not want to talk to people, which happens to both of them, but I'll try to watch myself when telling stories now. Is there any chance I could get an example or two of where this happened before though?

Anyway, thanks, Hope. ♥

[mentis_reae]

Okay! It took me a while going back to dig this up, but here's an example of the phenomenon. It doesn't happen often, obviously, since this is back from March...But anyway! Like you can see, she doled out her story in very small chunks. It turned out a little bit awkward on the other end, because it was like there were pauses for a reaction, but there was no reaction at that point. I mean, telling long stories in RP is kind of a balancing act, because you also don't want to go in the other direction and stampede the other player and not let them react or interrupt at all; I think you just lean a bit too far in the one direction.

And thank you, darling. ♥ You're my Alaskan lover and essay-writing queen, and I'm so glad we're friends.

[not_obsess3d]

Player Name: MK
Character Name: Xemnas
Character Journal: not_obsess3d
Character Canon Source: Kingdom Heeeearts

[walkthedawn]

I've enjoyed reading Xemnas' threads this past month. His fight with Xehanort was absolutely amazing and it's such a testament to your awesome as a writer. His return post, and his interactions, was so good too. I was especially stalking his thread with Roxas and I adore how you put the right spin of creep in to make him the menacing leader of Organization XIII. Keep it up!

[not_obsess3d]

adjkfdj so much stalking and thank you;;

[madannoshashu]

I have said it before, and I will say it again-- your Xemnas is truly the Number One to my Number Two.

Every thread with him is a delight, and last month, truly, was a great month for Xemnas and his development. I love how you hit all his nuances and the complexities that make Xemnas...well. Xemnas.

I'm so glad you brought him into SP from the Wake because, even though he's a character that resists change, the influence is still there, and I'm lovin' it.

Keep on rockin' yo' bad self. :3

[deceptive_lulz]

Player Name: NOISE
Character Name: Laughing Beauty
Character Journal: deceptive_lulz
Character Canon Source: Metal Gear Solid 4

I've also got an anon-enabled HMD if you'd feel more comfortable going there.

[cruelwonder]

I'm loving Alice and LB's CR. I've really liked all the things you've done with LB and I kept lamenting not having CR with you...but now I do! And I'm adoring every minute of it.

[deceptive_lulz]

I know! I kept getting sad that I never had CR with you as well, but I'm so glad we finally have something.

And thank you so much!