HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

New This Month! Please Read:
This Post is for BOTH Pro and Con crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support

Comments

[cruelwonder]

Player Name: Kal
Character Name: Riku
Character Journal: walkthedawn
Character Canon Source: Kingdom Hearts

Character Name: Re-l Mayer
Character Journal: proxysearch
Character Canon Source: Ergo Proxy

Character Name: Alice Liddell
Character Journal: cruelwonder
Character Canon Source: American McGee's Alice

Note: All of them have anon-enabled HMDs if you'd prefer. I know Riku's activity's been spotty. I'm kind of run down and out of ideas for him.

[he_is_wild]

I still greatly enjoy my CR with Re-l. It's so complex and unexpected and she's still so complex and interesting! Thank you for still putting up with me.

[proxysearch]

Thank you, dearie, for putting up with me.

[deceptive_lulz]

I just wanted to say that I'm already loving the interactions between Alice and LB so far! I really don't know anything about her canon, apart from what I've read in Plurk, but she seems like such a fascinating character! I really look forward to seeing how she develops in SP!

[cruelwonder]

I LOVE THEM TOO. I'm glad that you're liking Alice so far and I can't wait to interact more with you, bb.

[proxysearch]

You're sweet. ♥ Thank you!

[beenwaitinglong]

Re-l is consistently some of my favorite CR with Diegodot. I love their friendship and I'd love to do something more in-depth with her again, like right after Edgeworth's death a few months ago.

I am very uncreative at the moment unfortunately, but I'm sure I'll think of something...

[proxysearch]

WHILE I'M LOGGED IN HERE........

I think that there will be something at the end of the month or the beginning of August. Vincent Law is disappearing/dying and she's going to be...haha, almost broken in half by it and she's going to need a kick to get back on track.

[alwaysforhim]

Dear god, Kal, I love Alice to bits. She's fascinating, interesting, complex, and I love how you can have her interact with so many different characters while staying true to her characterization. I adore her CR with Jack; never stop.

[cruelwonder]

lsdkmflskn /)_(\ thank yoooou

[not_obsess3d]

I know Riku hasn't been that active lately, but I still think he's played very well. Rereading old threads and catching up on other logs, it's nice to see all of the different tones for him. The conflict with those who are enemies, the conflict in taking responsibility for what happened last month, seeing him reach out to Xion (d'awww babbies ;w;) - I love it. I need to tag with you more.

And I seriously need to tag the other characters you play. But yes, this is all I got.

[walkthedawn]

Thank you, darling. I really need to up my activity with him. And I would ADORE Xemnas tags to anyone. <333

[not_obsess3d]

You're welcome and you can do it! And WELL I guess I should do this now! XD;; >3

[mirroredmemory]

Kal I just love your Riku to bits. I love the balance you manage to keep with the responsible soul he is and his desire to keep his friends and allies safe, but at the same time he's got traces of vulnerability and doubt from his past choices and actions. He's like everyone's big brother and it's really interesting watching how you take him on beyond his game role and into a responsible young adult. Two thumbs way up for how you handled him through the Xehanort business, and I hope you find some ideas for him because he's just the perfect Riku in my opinion.

I don't really know much about your girls' canons so I can't say anything helpful there, but I find Alice creepy and fascinating and awesome and I'm going to keep on stalking.

[quackery]

Your activity levels are awesome! It's really great how many plots you're involved in, and in ways that are always appropriate to the character. Alice has been really fun to stalk as well!