...I am so confused. And caught up. It's probably a good thing Jensen's there with Jared or else that statement probably would have made Jared freak right the fuck out. Er, well, more than he's probably going to, at any rate. I'm loving this story so much!
“His brother is schizophrenic. When he doesn’t take his medications he’s ended up living on the streets.”
No no no, Jared! START with "I know this isn't your situation, but..."
Not that this was simple, but Jared had been so convinced, so sure that something had actually happened to Jensen. That the curse was real.
I'm so glad that you included this entire section because both Jared and seemingly Jeff readily accepting that Jensen had been cursed was confusing me. I kept waiting for "curses are real in this world" to be established in this 'verse but this scene works, too.
“Um, yeah, about that … So, um, Sandy tells me you’re into dick now.”
LOL! Oh, Chad, you're such a charmer.
An’ then I gave him an apple and he disappeared into the park. Love all these little fairy tale references and touches.
And I loved the porn, as always. :)
“Did I hurt you?” Jared asked incredulously
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OMG you are back! This makes my year so far (hee). Happy New Year!!
I'm glad you liked my handling of the 'magic' in the story. It's a tight balance between what is and isn't real. Yet the story is grounded very much in reality.
You plucked out my fave lines, especially the 'hurt without you.' line. Thanks for saying my love/sex scenes are working. I'm always so worried about this.
You are up to the real twist now. I hope you like it.
The opening scene is so beautiful and wonderfully written. Jared and Jensen walking down the street, occasionally brushing until Jared finally gave in and took Jensen’s hand in his. And Jensen pulling the hoodie down so that Jared could see his face, and it’s totally understandable that Jared couldn’t resist kissing Jensen. I laughed out loud though when Jensen told Jared that kissing wasn’t talking. I love these two!!
But then Jensen fled! I understand his reaction to finding out what Jared and Jeff had discussed, but… noI didn’t think Jensen ran because of any delusions, but fear that he was going to be locked up again. He stated before that if that happened, he wouldn’t survive it this time, which makes me think that he suffered some kind of abuse when he was previously locked up. And then when Jeff confirmed my fears that Jensen had been held at a mental facility - and, oh gosh, it was a municipal facility and for six months! - that pretty much did it for me. I couldn’t blame Jensen for running
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(Umm... sorry, got a little chatty with the comment, had to split it in two.)
And bless Jared’s heart. Tall Guy. :) Even though it’s only basic things, he’s made his search for Jensen more than just that. Sure, it’s a way to get some of the people to trust him, hopefully open up to him more and give him some information on Jensen, but still, such a tender heart that boy has.
“… You’re like Batman, Robin Hood and a freakin’ angel, all wrapped into one.”And Jensen finally showed himself! And he said, ‘My Jared’! Such a tender, tentative scene. Jared touching one finger to Jensen’s face, Jared leaning his face into Jensen’s palm. And then so hot and so intense together after Jensen’s shower. Jensen crying after it was over, admitting it hurt to be without Jared. Gosh, girl, you really bring out all of these emotions in me!! Especially at the end - what! The! Heck! Jeez, I hope I have enough time to read the next chapter before I have to get ready for work! I’m anxious to find out why Jensen’s family thinks he’s dead - or see about
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I am back! And back to your story, yay.
“Why trust Jeff?” Jensen asked unexpectedly.
Because he's your stand-in father, silly bean. :)
“His brother is schizophrenic. When he doesn’t take his medications he’s ended up living on the streets.”
No no no, Jared! START with "I know this isn't your situation, but..."
Not that this was simple, but Jared had been so convinced, so sure that something had actually happened to Jensen. That the curse was real.
I'm so glad that you included this entire section because both Jared and seemingly Jeff readily accepting that Jensen had been cursed was confusing me. I kept waiting for "curses are real in this world" to be established in this 'verse but this scene works, too.
“Um, yeah, about that … So, um, Sandy tells me you’re into dick now.”
LOL! Oh, Chad, you're such a charmer.
An’ then I gave him an apple and he disappeared into the park.
Love all these little fairy tale references and touches.
And I loved the porn, as always. :)
“Did I hurt you?” Jared asked incredulously ( ... )
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I'm glad you liked my handling of the 'magic' in the story. It's a tight balance between what is and isn't real. Yet the story is grounded very much in reality.
You plucked out my fave lines, especially the 'hurt without you.' line. Thanks for saying my love/sex scenes are working. I'm always so worried about this.
You are up to the real twist now. I hope you like it.
And, yea, for picking up on the apple reference!
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But then Jensen fled! I understand his reaction to finding out what Jared and Jeff had discussed, but… noI didn’t think Jensen ran because of any delusions, but fear that he was going to be locked up again. He stated before that if that happened, he wouldn’t survive it this time, which makes me think that he suffered some kind of abuse when he was previously locked up. And then when Jeff confirmed my fears that Jensen had been held at a mental facility - and, oh gosh, it was a municipal facility and for six months! - that pretty much did it for me. I couldn’t blame Jensen for running ( ... )
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And bless Jared’s heart. Tall Guy. :) Even though it’s only basic things, he’s made his search for Jensen more than just that. Sure, it’s a way to get some of the people to trust him, hopefully open up to him more and give him some information on Jensen, but still, such a tender heart that boy has.
“… You’re like Batman, Robin Hood and a freakin’ angel, all wrapped into one.”And Jensen finally showed himself! And he said, ‘My Jared’! Such a tender, tentative scene. Jared touching one finger to Jensen’s face, Jared leaning his face into Jensen’s palm. And then so hot and so intense together after Jensen’s shower. Jensen crying after it was over, admitting it hurt to be without Jared. Gosh, girl, you really bring out all of these emotions in me!! Especially at the end - what! The! Heck! Jeez, I hope I have enough time to read the next chapter before I have to get ready for work! I’m anxious to find out why Jensen’s family thinks he’s dead - or see about ( ... )
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