Comments | sandymg: When Your Lover Breaks, Ch. 10, NC-17, RPS, Non-AU, Jensen/Jared

sandymg

When Your Lover Breaks, Ch. 10, NC-17, RPS, Non-AU, Jensen/Jared

Jul 17, 2010 23:43

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jensen/jared, jared padalecki, j2, rps, when your lover breaks, jensen ackles, 2010 spn/j2 big bang, non-au

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qblackheart August 11 2010, 01:29:33 UTC

I cried. Again. And now my chest feels all squishy with the glorious angst in this part. I also have this earnest desire to read everything you've ever written. Right after I'm done with this.

sandymg August 11 2010, 01:36:51 UTC

This chapter is one of my personal favorites. I really liked how the convention scene came out. I'm glad you liked it and commented on this part. Can't wait to get your overall opinion. Thanks so much for the ongoing comments -- means so much.

alienat August 13 2010, 20:11:40 UTC

And here I thought they were doing better again. Well, apparently I was wrong. Still loved the it though. ;)

sandymg August 13 2010, 20:20:52 UTC

You'll prob be pleased with the next chapter. :) But I have to admit their journey is not yet over. I can't wait to hear what you thought of the story overall.

pussycatbelle August 15 2010, 16:50:38 UTC

They're both idiots. And I say that in the nicest sense of the word, lol.

sandymg August 15 2010, 18:14:31 UTC

Yeah. They have their dumb moments. But I choose not to keep them dumb too long :)

jimpp September 21 2010, 11:20:43 UTC

oOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH

i cheered and my hands are sore from clapping jesnen on stage and now i feel sad.........

sandymg September 21 2010, 13:08:52 UTC

Patience :)

I really appreciate your reading and your comments. Thanks!

I have a feeling this is going to be long twirlycurls November 16 2010, 17:23:40 UTC

Poor Jen, looking at the photos of Jared and Genevieve. Thank you for not having them actually enter a relationship or get engaged, I don't think I could have handled that!

Genevieve lifted up at this, eyes glazed, still smiling. “You never called me that be-“ Brown eyes met his, suddenly growing huge. “Oh god.”
I'm so glad that you have her take this well and behave like a mature grown-up.

It felt good being with the fans again. They energized Jared. Fueled his self-esteem, and his sense of play.
That's the sense I got from watching a con vid featuring him.

“Wait. I’m going to answer that one. But only that one.” He turned first to the young woman, but then directed his answer straight out to the entire audience. He moved his eyes slowly over the crowd, a sea of anxious faces. He kept his voice steady and strong and knew he sounded more Sam-like than he’d ever been in front of fans. But it wasn’t Sam that was speaking. “No.”
Love this SO much, and then OMG JENSEN WALKS IN!! This is seriously one of the best parts of the entire ( ... )

Re: I have a feeling this is going to be long sandymg November 16 2010, 17:37:01 UTC

Thanks so much. I was typing a really long response to your comment and it just vanished so now I'm all grrrr. I appreciate your detailed comments so much. It's a pleasure to read what works and makes me learn and grow as a writer ( ... )

Re: I have a feeling this is going to be long twirlycurls November 16 2010, 22:56:55 UTC

Oh man, I hate it when LJ eats my comments! A few weeks ago I put together one of my looooong feedbacks filled with quotes and comments and meta and when I posted it -- *CHOMP* -- yes, it ended in tears. :) I've learned to copy/paste anything I don't want to lose into Wordpad.

It was up to Jensen now. His going to Jared was literal and symbolic and accomplished what needed to be done.
That was so wonderful and perfect, a fabulous emotional high for the story. And it's such a *long* story that I'm amazed you keep finding these emotional high points, building up to them and then delivering.

I strongly approve of you bringing Gen into the story but not Danneel. She could have taken some of Mac's stuff but it just would have diluted Mac's character and I really enjoyed feeling like I was getting to know her.

Re: I have a feeling this is going to be long sandymg November 16 2010, 22:59:13 UTC

I can't wait to see what you think of chapter 13 and the top of 14. I wrote the dang thing 3 times. I don't mean just tweaks. Full out rewrites! I thought the story would just die right there and I started hating it. But now ... well, time heals all wounds. :)