You had me in tears again, at the end. Jensen you are really an idiot :) Jared is so vulnerable and his heart is already broken and he is a little bit healing and then Jensen has to asked this question. I know it is not easy for Jensen, too. And he must be confused and unsure of Jared but it really breaks my heart to see these to so hurt. I love it!!!
I think you will be pleased with the next chapter. At least I really hope so. Looking forward to your further thoughts on the story! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment.
Thank you for your reply! I know how much a comment means to the author of a story because I wrote some of myself. I am glad that I could read your story because it is really great.
LOVED the con!!! Holy crap, that was perfect!!! I can just see/hear Jensen making his entrance, and the crowd going bananas! All of this - I can SO see it happen IRL! And still, tormented for the boys...
I like your Chris. It’s good that he’s there for Jensen in a way that he needs right now. And it’s also good that Jensen is getting to hear from his family and friends what Jensen hadn’t seen, hadn’t been able to see, just after his accident. All pieces of the puzzle for him to fit together.
I love this (Chris makes me smile):
“Oh. I see,” Chris drawled, making the short words linger in the air. “Was your idea. Good to know it won’t bother you, him following your advice.”
At least Jared and Jensen surround themselves by smart people, and friends who love them. :)
Gosh, I love your way with words:
His mike fell with an uncomfortable thud but he didn’t hear it because his arms surrounded Jensen and brought him closer and arms that he’d missed more than breathing were holding him back, squeezing his heart back to life.I thought you handled the intimacy between Jared and Genevieve well. Jared had to be lonely, missed the intimacy, and also had to be frustrated at getting only a taste of what his relationship with Jensen could be. I’m
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Thanks! The convention sequence was written before I ever attended a con. But I wouldn't change it. It was pretty true to the emotionally charged atmosphere.
You always point out my fave lines. You are right ... that the 'idiot' line is very much a dual wake up call.
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Jensen you are really an idiot :)
Jared is so vulnerable and his heart is already broken and he is a little bit healing and then Jensen has to asked this question.
I know it is not easy for Jensen, too. And he must be confused and unsure of Jared but it really breaks my heart to see these to so hurt.
I love it!!!
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I am glad that I could read your story because it is really great.
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I think you'll like the upcoming chapter. Although their ride is not yet over.
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I love this (Chris makes me smile):
“Oh. I see,” Chris drawled, making the short words linger in the air. “Was your idea. Good to know it won’t bother you, him following your advice.”
At least Jared and Jensen surround themselves by smart people, and friends who love them. :)
Gosh, I love your way with words:
His mike fell with an uncomfortable thud but he didn’t hear it because his arms surrounded Jensen and brought him closer and arms that he’d missed more than breathing were holding him back, squeezing his heart back to life.I thought you handled the intimacy between Jared and Genevieve well. Jared had to be lonely, missed the intimacy, and also had to be frustrated at getting only a taste of what his relationship with Jensen could be. I’m ( ... )
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You always point out my fave lines. You are right ... that the 'idiot' line is very much a dual wake up call.
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