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In Production- Part Two (J2) NC-17

Jun 26, 2008 21:05

Title: In Production
Author: reccea
Artist: waterofthemoon
Genre: RPS
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
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Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five and Epilogue

( Part Two )

in production, fic, j2, spn

Comments 12

gilesgirl June 27 2008, 21:38:55 UTC

Great chapter! :)

*goes off to read the next part*

reccea June 29 2008, 22:04:38 UTC

Thank you.

minniemax June 29 2008, 21:34:29 UTC

I'm enjoying the story very much so far :-) and just found a bit where you suddenly switched the tense, which is kind of confusing LOL

Jared arched his eyebrows. “Energy through osmosis ( ... )

reccea June 29 2008, 22:04:20 UTC

Fixed. Thanks very much.

marciaelena July 1 2008, 08:47:40 UTC

Still loving this. I love the easy camaraderie between them, and god, how can they not realize they're made for each other? Though I get the impression Jared's the one who doesn't realize it. Was that Jensen feeling jealous when that French guy was hitting on Jared? Absolutely LOVED Jensen falling asleep tucked against Jared in his trailer.

Found a few more typos:

Jared breaks off another piece of the chocolate bar and shoves it into Jensen's mouth. "Don't be a dick." He stands up, stepa over the small table and sits down on the couch next to Jensen. He sits close, arm resting against Jensen's, thighs touching, but careful of the raw side. He picks the ice pack up, rests it against the angry flesh and then settles back. Jensen tilts to the right a little, pressing against him.

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Jensen's favoring his leg pretty badly the next morning, wearing a pair of pants that look old and soft as anything. He comes into the kitchen just after Jared gets back frommhis run. It's a lot earlier than Jared's expecting because the next two days ( ... )

marciaelena July 2 2008, 16:30:15 UTC

Ah. Uhm, yeah. Me again. :-)

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"Oh, she's over that," Jensen shook his head. "She just comes back from the store going on about unpasteurized dairy products, and I don't want to know."

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Jared tipped his beer in Jen's direction. "I hear that."

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Jensen's still up when he comes home, sitting on the couch front of the TV, wearing a white t-shirt, plaid boxers and his glasses.

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"Right, Jerry Lewis." Jared got down two mugs. "My mom liked Dean Martin better."

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"I tried telling my agent that, and he had a little nervous breakdown." Jensen closed his eyes. There's blood on the right side of his face, artfully splashed across his nose and down by his mouth. It's makeup, of course, and not an unfamiliar sight for Jared.

n_n yummm n_n mersedes03 April 28 2009, 04:44:56 UTC

“Have a safe flight, Jay.” With a rueful smile, like he’s been trying to resist, he tips an imaginary hat in Jared’s direction before he gets back into the car. “Here’s looking at you kid.”

omgsh, i love that part! hm, partly because it's one my friend and i have acted out and loved!!! ♥ go humphrey bogart. And yummy jensen in a suit! Way to go girl!!