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In Production- Part One (J2) NC-17

Jun 26, 2008 20:50

Title: In Production
Author: reccea
Artist: waterofthemoon
Genre: RPS
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
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Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five and Epilogue

( Part One )

in production, fic, j2, spn

Comments 12

gilesgirl June 27 2008, 20:46:51 UTC

AWESOME FIRST CHAPTER! :D

*goes off to read the rest*

*hugs*

reccea June 29 2008, 22:05:22 UTC

Thank you!

Yah! nameles_one June 27 2008, 23:29:43 UTC

I've been looking forward to your post. :D
A Not So Modest Proposal is one of my favorite stories.
Ta for sharing. :D

Re: Yah! reccea June 29 2008, 22:06:06 UTC

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me. I hope this story lived up to your expectations.

marciaelena July 1 2008, 07:46:28 UTC

Oh man, this is absolutely gorgeous so far. I love it that they've stayed close friends through the years. I love the banter, the touching, the genuine love and concern they have for each other. The scene where they're eating from the same plate? OMG, so much LOVE. *grin* Seriously, they're like an old married couple already, knowing each other so well and working so perfectly together. Can't wait to read the rest. ♥

Also, I found a typo, I hope it's okay to point it out?

Filming on Monday is hectic, one of those days where everything goes wrong, everyone's pissed off, and nothing gets done in a reasonable number of takes. Bob Singer’s on set, so he and Jared have lunch together and go over the latest draft og the finale

marciaelena July 2 2008, 12:56:14 UTC

Well, I'm reading this again. That's how much I loved it. :-)

Found a few switched tenses I didn't notice the first time. I really, really hope you don't mind--it's not like I'm looking for things to fix or anything. I just notice these things, in everything I read, actually. Even published books by famous authors.

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Jensen frowned. "We agreed not to talk about that." He moved his left leg a few inches, pressing his calf to Jared's.

"I reserved the right to all avenues of mocking after your salary hit fifteen million." Jared tilted his chin down and raised both his eyebrows.

The corner of Jensen's mouth goes up, fighting a smile. "Fair enough."

"Anyway, I thought you were the big Drama Guy now." Jared finished his water, ice cubes clicking against his teeth.

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Jensen gives him a cocky grin that was all attitude and not much truth. "That too."

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Jensen drains his mug and set it down. He catches the waiter's eye and gestures for the check. "I'm gonna take that as a yes."

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Jen claps his shoulders and then lets ( ... )

acchikocchi December 9 2008, 06:13:20 UTC

More comments when I finish reading but -- GRABEEL, hee! ♥