In Production- Part One (J2) NC-17

Jun 26, 2008 20:50

Title: In Production
Author: reccea
Artist: waterofthemoon
Genre: RPS
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
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Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five and Epilogue

Part One )

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marciaelena July 2 2008, 12:56:14 UTC
Well, I'm reading this again. That's how much I loved it. :-)

Found a few switched tenses I didn't notice the first time. I really, really hope you don't mind--it's not like I'm looking for things to fix or anything. I just notice these things, in everything I read, actually. Even published books by famous authors.

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Jensen frowned. "We agreed not to talk about that." He moved his left leg a few inches, pressing his calf to Jared's.

"I reserved the right to all avenues of mocking after your salary hit fifteen million." Jared tilted his chin down and raised both his eyebrows.

The corner of Jensen's mouth goes up, fighting a smile. "Fair enough."

"Anyway, I thought you were the big Drama Guy now." Jared finished his water, ice cubes clicking against his teeth.

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Jensen gives him a cocky grin that was all attitude and not much truth. "That too."

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Jensen drains his mug and set it down. He catches the waiter's eye and gestures for the check. "I'm gonna take that as a yes."

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Jen claps his shoulders and then lets go. "You don't have to bullshit me, Jared. I'm not going to tell anyone," he said softly.

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Jensen rolled his eyes. "I am prepared for the apocalypse, yes."

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Jared hears the razor turns off, and for a long moment Jensen doesn't say anything. He huffs a breath, swallows audibly, and then, "Hire movers if you have to. Just come, okay?"

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