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[raizael]

title: the story goes
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: nishikato
summary: ryo watches him and then turns his attention to his wife, but it's not like he forgets about the boy in the house.
notes: fictional. my first ever remix, of lightstylings' at sixteen; 1001 concisities. i'm afraid it's boring and lacks a rock n' roll ending, but i just hope i didn't kill

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[lightstylings]

SAVED SAVED SAVED

[raizael]

OMG YOU'RE FAST.

[lightstylings]

First of all, you have such amazing fic ploughing abilities. I can’t believe you did this all in one night so take that ‘fail’ tag off because it’s not applicable, okay? I had to read it twice just to make sure I could give a proper comment that was more than keyboard smash but take some anyway: AKJSDKCVNSJKVB!!1! So sorry this is many hours after fic posting (I got dragged into buying and pulling 25kilos of rice home).

As a fic and remix this is perfect, I smiled every time you made a reference back and was well worth getting up early for. I’d been refreshing my friends page for at least fifteen minutes before you posted. I shall now begin to pick apart all the bits that make it love but I’m thinking that it’s going to be the majority. Just to say, I loved the approach. Logically, it makes sense to centre around Ryo but that doesn’t take away from your crafted narration.

One day he overhears from his wife: the nephew's name is Kato Shigeaki, the poor boy from neighborhoods across with no family left (the wife says).I’m really

[chartre]

OMG IT'S THE MOTHER OF ALL COMMENTS. I will give you loads of big hears too~

♥♥♥♥♥

I shall now read the love~

[fairy_illusions]

And here I thought I could beat Leyla to spot~ *sigh*

[fairy_illusions]

Sorry for the delay in commenting! It was kind of late at night and I needed to sleep after I read it, but here's the comment you truly deserve.

I really enjoyed this remix. While the style is different than the original, you had one of your own and that was great :] It's great that you embed so many of the little things in the original and I can NEVER get enough of Shige shuffling about because that is just about the cutest image there is LOL

I've always really wanted to see Ryo's side of the story because I absolutely adored what I could derive from Shige's perspective. It's just...how exactly does Ryo feel about dating his "nephew" (even if it's just by association) and does he feel a bit strange and maybe guilty that he's over his wife and onto his wife's relative? And I've always been like: HOW much older is Ryo-chan but from what I can tell, he's older, but not by too much. Expected since he works at a host bar, right?

And um...yeah. Shige shuffling ftw!I LOVED the ending. Yes. The ending of the original was Ryo taking the

[raizael]

Thankyouthankyouthankyou! :D and no problem about the late reply, I think I should be the one to apologize since I'm not very good with addressing compliments, they really do make me fluster, ashjgfslukagkj ♥

But I'm glad you do like it, and imagining Ryo dating his nephew!Shige is rather odd, but I like the idea of it, definitely. 8D

[newskattuneito]

nice fic ^^
ryoshige kawaii couple ahahks
little bit angst but its ok i like so much
please write more about them ^^

[vinyaromeniel]

it's a wonderful remix :)

And I fail at commenting. haha.

I like the angst. And the end ;)

[catskilt]

It's lovely and lyrical and you're so talented ♥

[chartre]

*blushes* Thank you~ x)