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title: the story goes
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: nishikato
summary: ryo watches him and then turns his attention to his wife, but it's not like he forgets about the boy in the house.
notes: fictional. my first ever remix, of lightstylings' at sixteen; 1001 concisities. i'm afraid it's boring and lacks a rock n' roll ending, but i just hope i didn't kill ( Read more... )
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: nishikato
summary: ryo watches him and then turns his attention to his wife, but it's not like he forgets about the boy in the house.
notes: fictional. my first ever remix, of lightstylings' at sixteen; 1001 concisities. i'm afraid it's boring and lacks a rock n' roll ending, but i just hope i didn't kill ( Read more... )
I really enjoyed this remix. While the style is different than the original, you had one of your own and that was great :] It's great that you embed so many of the little things in the original and I can NEVER get enough of Shige shuffling about because that is just about the cutest image there is LOL
I've always really wanted to see Ryo's side of the story because I absolutely adored what I could derive from Shige's perspective. It's just...how exactly does Ryo feel about dating his "nephew" (even if it's just by association) and does he feel a bit strange and maybe guilty that he's over his wife and onto his wife's relative? And I've always been like: HOW much older is Ryo-chan but from what I can tell, he's older, but not by too much. Expected since he works at a host bar, right?
And um...yeah. Shige shuffling ftw!
I LOVED the ending. Yes. The ending of the original was Ryo taking the initiative. Here, we see just that (and Shige responding to it in just the right way) :] :] :]
Okay, yeah I spam. lol NICELY DONE &hearts
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But I'm glad you do like it, and imagining Ryo dating his nephew!Shige is rather odd, but I like the idea of it, definitely. 8D
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