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[raizael]

title: the story goes
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: nishikato
summary: ryo watches him and then turns his attention to his wife, but it's not like he forgets about the boy in the house.
notes: fictional. my first ever remix, of lightstylings' at sixteen; 1001 concisities. i'm afraid it's boring and lacks a rock n' roll ending, but i just hope i didn't kill

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[lightstylings]

SAVED SAVED SAVED

[raizael]

OMG YOU'RE FAST.

[lightstylings]

First of all, you have such amazing fic ploughing abilities. I can’t believe you did this all in one night so take that ‘fail’ tag off because it’s not applicable, okay? I had to read it twice just to make sure I could give a proper comment that was more than keyboard smash but take some anyway: AKJSDKCVNSJKVB!!1! So sorry this is many hours after fic posting (I got dragged into buying and pulling 25kilos of rice home).

As a fic and remix this is perfect, I smiled every time you made a reference back and was well worth getting up early for. I’d been refreshing my friends page for at least fifteen minutes before you posted. I shall now begin to pick apart all the bits that make it love but I’m thinking that it’s going to be the majority. Just to say, I loved the approach. Logically, it makes sense to centre around Ryo but that doesn’t take away from your crafted narration.

One day he overhears from his wife: the nephew's name is Kato Shigeaki, the poor boy from neighborhoods across with no family left (the wife says).I’m really

[chartre]

OMG IT'S THE MOTHER OF ALL COMMENTS. I will give you loads of big hears too~

♥♥♥♥♥

I shall now read the love~

[chartre]

Just finished reading it, and I just wish I had your ability to put it all into words because I'm quite the opposite, I may not get you anything more than even more hearts and keyboard smashing love ♥♥♥

ajgkjsgdshdlfgsgadkjf ♥♥♥Still, I will try because you gave me one heck of a comment :D