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Erase the Dream (Rewrite the Scene) [pg13~] Sam/Dean

Aug 21, 2010 00:02

Title: Erase the Dream (Rewrite the Scene)
Author: queenklu
Beta by: locknkey
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: pg13~
Word Count: 6,626 eeeexactly
Summary: So this fic began MONTHS ago, as a Dean POV companion piece to I Already Know (On With the Show)--(This fic will probably make more sense if you've read that already, eep.) It was also completely written months ago. ( Read more... )

myfics, spnfics, the epic love story of sam&dean, wincest, writing: i does it

Comments 52

leodragon1 August 21 2010, 15:21:23 UTC

Yay!

Dean is so intense about Sam, and Sam is just as bad. I love how you captured that need with each POV. Man, those two.

So glad you decided to post this. I can't imagine why you hated it!

queenklu August 22 2010, 03:55:38 UTC

*blush* Ohhhhh thank you bb, i'm really glad you liked it! It was just. Stupidly difficult getting into Dean's headspace when Sam is his everything and his everything's--gone. UGH SEE? IT FEELS TRITE.

But i have come to the conclusion that Dean wouldn't know how to say it either, so he just fumbles around with metaphores and melodramatics and tries to get through to the end. Just like me. (My conclusion is horribly self-serving, just fyi.)

Er. Anyway. <333333

mdlaw August 21 2010, 17:11:36 UTC

Oh Dean's pov is so painful,,so longing. m :)

queenklu August 22 2010, 03:56:54 UTC

*squeezes Dean tight* Thank you for reading! :DD

sin_unforgiven August 21 2010, 19:21:10 UTC

You are a goddess. A goddess of the WINCHESTERWORD~! This was...exquisite. Some of the concepts you introduced in this had me wanting to nearly tear at my heart with the intensity. Case and point--"And if some nights he woke up in a cold sweat because Sammy stopped breathing, well. He was not wrong." That was sooo perfectly Dean, that Dean would wake up in the middle of the night with that residual "something's wrong, Sammy's not breathing" only to find that the reason it was so quite was because Sam was gone. I also really liked this line: "Fourteenth time Dean went to the bakery for coffee in two weeks he thought about admitting to himself he had a problem, but Winchesters had never been big on being self-aware ( ... )

queenklu August 22 2010, 19:09:50 UTC

Oh maaaaan...*BLUSHHHHH* THANK YOU SO MUCH! I--I--I don't really know what to say to such glowing feedback! *TACKLEGLOMPS*

Seriously. SERIOUSLY. I JUST. WHAT.

...*CLINGS* ♥ ♥ ♥

sagetan August 21 2010, 21:32:16 UTC

You write them so believably and so poignantly. These two fics are lovely, and make my heart hurt in a very wonderful way. Thanks for sharing! ♥

queenklu August 22 2010, 19:11:05 UTC

Oh thank you bb! I really so glad you liked it! I was worried about believability (possibly...probably...not a word)--i'm just really happy it worked for you! <333

slothfulzel August 22 2010, 04:21:54 UTC

Okay so first of all... /explodes

Now that that's out of the way... This is wonderfully amazing. You know I adore all of your things, but this? I don't even know, you have a really special way of wording/seeing things that makes me go TOT and *o* and 'alkmvoewifajslkmfoaifjslkfjas;lm'. Which is a great thing, I swear.

And if some nights he woke up in a cold sweat because Sammy stopped breathing, well. He was not wrong.

That freakin' broke my heart, but it also made my heart swell with SAMMY!/DEAN!RELATIONSHIPLOVE. I adore things that remind me of the brotherly love that the Winchesters share, not just the needwant that they also share.

I'm typing this as I go, so it's probably gonna read like hell, just so you know. >>;

I love how in the first fic, the one in Sam's POV, all Sam saw was ApplePieLife!Dean being so happy or at least moving on-- he didn't see what was right in front of him (aka: Dean goin' bat shit crazy without his brother). It just shows that the brothers are crazy. They both only see what they think they should ( ... )

queenklu August 22 2010, 19:22:33 UTC

Okay, i was saving the rest of my gushing for this comment, because OH MY GOD ARE YOU EVER THE BEST BOOST TO MY EGO. ♥ ♥ ♥

The 'Sammy stopped breathing' line was my absolute favorite part to write, because i'm evil and like ripping my readers' hearts to shreds, apparently. :/

AHAHAHA Sam's so delusional. (I guess they both are.) This whole companion piece started because a good friend pointed out the seriously UNLIKELY-TUDE of Dean going to Parent/Teacher conferences, and in a display of 'Well, i'm a writer i can fix that' i just showed that he didn't. And Sam sees what it hurts him to see. THESE BOYS.

I stole the name Prior from Angels in America--I'm not sure either of the boys get the reference. (Sorry for spelling errors, i'm rushing before i'm dragged out the door eep)

I LOVE THAT I MADE YOUR BRAIN SPIN OFF INTO BACKSTORY! WHAT A GREAT COMPLIMENT! XDDDD

And now i have to go, but OMG YOU HAVE SINCERELY MADE MY DAY!