Erase the Dream (Rewrite the Scene) [pg13~] Sam/Dean

[queenklu]

Title: Erase the Dream (Rewrite the Scene)
Author: queenklu 
Beta by: locknkey 
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: pg13~
Word Count: 6,626 eeeexactly
Summary: So this fic began MONTHS ago, as a Dean POV companion piece to I Already Know (On With the Show)--(This fic will probably make more sense if you've read that already, eep.) It was also completely written months ago.

Comments

[jennybliss]

This was awesome!! Like rip my heart out good. I could feel the intensity of Dean's emotions. You did a wonderful job and you definitely should be proud to post this!!

[queenklu]

Oh thank you bb! I was really worried about this fic--THANK YOU!

[queenklu]

Oh thank you bb! I was worried people would get bored reading this, already knowing what happened--i'm so glad you think it worked! :DD

[jolietjones]

You've got me reading Sam and Dean again....

I love that you wrote Dean's point of view.

And I love this whole fic. It explains everything and makes everything perfect. Your Lisa is like the most understanding person EVA.

I really want to see photographic evidence of Sam as Prior!

[queenklu]

HEEEEEEEEE. UNREPENANT. XD

I'm so glad you liked this bb! And Lisa--i hope like hell she's half as understanding when the show starts up *FINGERS CROSSED* (p.s. I'm totally unspoiled, so as to better lie to myself.)

OH ME THREE. Think we could coerce anyone into photoshopping it? :D

[cordelia_gray]

I can't even tell you how much I love this. Dean, falling apart and trying, for Sam, and setting up the spare room for his dead brother, and Prior though Dean's eyes - throwing kneaded balls of dough onto a tray like they had personally broken his heart - gah! My heart!

And the last line - so perfectly them. I've had a pretty rough week, and this is exactly the touch of hurt and comfort and snark that I needed. Thank you for posting this, even if you weren't sure about it.

[queenklu]

Oh wow, seriously, thank you! Sorry about your week, hon, I'm so glad this managed to make you feel a little better--these boys are good for catharsis, huh? :DD

[callowyn]

I opened this story and was reading along, thinking, "tra la la, I read this in Sam's POV, I know how this goes," when I got to this line:

And if some nights he woke up in a cold sweat because Sammy stopped breathing, well. He was not wrong.

MY. HEART. BROKE. Seriously, you capture Dean so well in this, how (as Lisa points out) there's really nothing that doesn't remind him of Sam, and the way he can't stop himself from wallowing in his memories even as he follows the letter of his promise. This really made the original story much richer, and I loved it even though it made me cry. <3

[queenklu]

Oh i'm sorry i made you cry! (And kind of weirdly glad the piece was strong enough to elicit that reaction :/) Thank you so much, though! Seriously and truly, you have brightened my day ♥ ♥ ♥