Erase the Dream (Rewrite the Scene) [pg13~] Sam/Dean
Title: Erase the Dream (Rewrite the Scene)
Author: queenklu
Beta by: locknkey
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: pg13~
Word Count: 6,626 eeeexactly
Summary: So this fic began MONTHS ago, as a Dean POV companion piece to I Already Know (On With the Show)--(This fic will probably make more sense if you've read that already, eep.) It was also completely written months ago. ( Read more... )
Now that that's out of the way... This is wonderfully amazing. You know I adore all of your things, but this? I don't even know, you have a really special way of wording/seeing things that makes me go TOT and *o* and 'alkmvoewifajslkmfoaifjslkfjas;lm'. Which is a great thing, I swear.
And if some nights he woke up in a cold sweat because Sammy stopped breathing, well. He was not wrong.
That freakin' broke my heart, but it also made my heart swell with SAMMY!/DEAN!RELATIONSHIPLOVE. I adore things that remind me of the brotherly love that the Winchesters share, not just the needwant that they also share.
I'm typing this as I go, so it's probably gonna read like hell, just so you know. >>;
I love how in the first fic, the one in Sam's POV, all Sam saw was ApplePieLife!Dean being so happy or at least moving on-- he didn't see what was right in front of him (aka: Dean goin' bat shit crazy without his brother). It just shows that the brothers are crazy. They both only see what they think they should see or what they want to see, they never look to see what's really in front of them. /rants on forever
Oh, by the way, love the name Prior. Like a lot.
Dean wasn’t a hunter, he wasn’t a brother, he wasn’t even a son. Orphan.
All I can do is weep. Thanks. T-T
You’ll never love someone until you can love yourself. Dean was pretty sure he’d read that on a bottle cap somewhere.
HOLYSHI-- I totally just made a complete backstory to just that one sentence. THIS is why I read your stuff. It makes me make stuff and feel creative all on my own. Highest compliment I give, dearheart.
You make me love Lisa. Not that I disliked her to begin with, but you make her awesome, just sayin'~
“What-“ Sam looked like a unicorn had just pranced by and farted a rainbow.
I love you for that.
HOW DO YOU ALWAYS DO THAT?! THE LAST LINES ALWAYS FUCKIN' PUNCH ME IN THE FACE! /wibbbbbbbbbbbbles
Anyway... this has turned into a monster, skim over it if you wish. XD But yeeeah. GREAT FIC. LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!
<333
Abby~
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The 'Sammy stopped breathing' line was my absolute favorite part to write, because i'm evil and like ripping my readers' hearts to shreds, apparently. :/
AHAHAHA Sam's so delusional. (I guess they both are.) This whole companion piece started because a good friend pointed out the seriously UNLIKELY-TUDE of Dean going to Parent/Teacher conferences, and in a display of 'Well, i'm a writer i can fix that' i just showed that he didn't. And Sam sees what it hurts him to see. THESE BOYS.
I stole the name Prior from Angels in America--I'm not sure either of the boys get the reference. (Sorry for spelling errors, i'm rushing before i'm dragged out the door eep)
I LOVE THAT I MADE YOUR BRAIN SPIN OFF INTO BACKSTORY! WHAT A GREAT COMPLIMENT! XDDDD
And now i have to go, but OMG YOU HAVE SINCERELY MADE MY DAY!
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