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donna_c_punk May 8 2003, 21:06:56 UTC
::sits in corner, whimpering and rocking back and forth::

"What have I gotten poor Hogwarts into?"

I'm sure the readers are asking the same question.

That's it. That's all I have in me.

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donna_c_punk May 11 2003, 01:43:09 UTC
Doubledore must've been this retarded twin of Dumbledore's that was set loose into the HP fic world. That's must be it. I can see no other explanation. Besides the author a fucking moron.

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clannoire May 16 2003, 05:34:16 UTC
"Not so fast!" a voice shouted from behind him. Voldemort turned suddenly to see a girl of who looked like 16 or 17 smiling at him. She wore a black cloak that matched her spikey black hair. "Bombay." he said, in his voice was the smallest hint of fear.

*snorts* Why am I imagining a 40's Hong Kong action flick?
And what's with the terrible naming? There are thousands of wonderful names out there, why in the world would someone name their offspring 'Bombay' or 'Dragon' ... hold on. I take that back. Draco Malfoy, I know. The poor child. ;)
But honestly, I have trouble believing those names are meant for girls. Woodwolf? Andre?? Meh?

Bombay raised her hand and shouted a random word, "Penguin!"

I snorted up my mocha up at this one. PENGUIN??

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jovial_kitten May 16 2003, 22:30:10 UTC
Thank you!
I choked on my drink when I read that.
Seems more like something Ron would do in the first year of school.

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clannoire November 29 2008, 02:24:24 UTC
If you just read the dialouge, it kinda resembles a messed-up comic book.

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Did you all see this review of it? theonewhospeaks May 17 2003, 07:10:48 UTC
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blacknyx 2003-04-17 4 Anonymous
*L* Oh, that was SO cool! I am surprised people don't review oftenly, I mean, I loved it, you protrayed the characters so that the actually have a depth of their own, not to mention what those girls do to the poor Hogwarts...I think Dumbledore was right, what has he gotten poor Hogwarts into? *L* anyways, please, don't get discouraged, write ahead, update, if no one'll follow up - though I doubt it, it's too nice to be ignored!- I promise I will!
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"Oftenly"???

I don't know if I would be flattered or insulted to get a review like this, but it sure is darn funny.

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intarwebz8myhw November 2 2004, 17:54:38 UTC
Oh God! It's like a really terible, badly dubbed anime. Only worse. *scours brain*

I guess that's what I get for braving the archives. *shudders* What horrors lie in wait for me?

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