Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine
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I'm worried about Barnes seeing them talk - a confrontation would be a major setback for Ennis at this point...Plus, I dont want my boys getting hurt.
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And I almost mentioned it to you, but then I remembered IT"S A FICTIONAL STORY!
With fictional characters! So no litter was actually dumped!
Too funny that people called you out on this! You made me laugh. Big hugs. Barbara
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I agree about the pacing being so important to a story; and you do a great job with it.
Ennis felt something for him that was clear.
“Ya didn’t do nothing wrong Jack. It’s just...this thing it...it just can’t happen between us that’s all.”
He knew Ennis cared for him; it was the one thing in the world he was sure of
At least now Jack knows why Ennis behaves the way he does. Now he knows Ennis has the same feelings for him - a comforting thought. As long as they know, it's ok to have them struggling with their issues, if this makes any sense, lol.
Looking forward to more, as always.
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That sentence was utter perfection!! I'm loving this story!! Can't wait to read more!
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