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[fic post] Merit

Jan 07, 2010 02:42

Title: Merit
Rating: G
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Pairings or Characters: Kyouya/Haruhi
Warnings: ridiculous amounts of fluff
Word Count: 741
Summary: Most would be taken aback when the woman they were proposing to demanded an explanation for it. Kyouya had figured she would ask and had prepared an answer in advance.
Author Notes: For teh_amazing_one. My handle on ( Read more... )

ouran, pairing -- kyouya/haruhi, !fic, gift, rating -- [g]

Comments 32

frostheavens January 7 2010, 20:54:11 UTC

So, so cute. You have Kyouya's voice down. I miss Ouran sometimes :(

oceansex January 15 2010, 00:42:17 UTC

a;slkdfjs I miss Ouran all the tiiiiiiiime ;~;

3kame January 7 2010, 23:55:13 UTC

I loved it! ♥Haru/Kyo♥

oceansex January 15 2010, 00:42:30 UTC

hee, thank you x)

teh_amazing_one January 8 2010, 01:29:13 UTC

I feel bad, but I didn't know this was intended for me.

It's very good though! I, too, could hear Haruhi's anime voice saying this.

oceansex January 15 2010, 00:44:08 UTC

don't feel bad! I just wanted to write a bunch (though, admittedly, these are all ending up late orz), and as soon as you suggested Kyouya/Haruhi, this popped into my head so it was no trouble at all. ;)

and very happy to hear I got her voice down! ^_^

surmise January 9 2010, 07:24:34 UTC

YAY KYOUYA. OURAN HIGHHHH. Hi bb <3 This was such a treat to read ~

oceansex January 15 2010, 00:45:03 UTC

fffffffffff Kyouya is such a cutie /PINCHES HIS WIDDLE CHEEKS

glad you liked, bb ;) ♥

silentcynara January 21 2010, 01:58:18 UTC

"No, I mean why me? There's nothing in it at all for you."

"Does that mean you think I dated you simply because there was merit to be gained?"

Oh I loved this, and I don't think Kyouya was OOC here. Haruhi's reaction was priceless, and though there's no "dokidoki" the way she went when she realized she loved Tamaki in the manga, I think you pulled off an older Haruhi in a relationship with Kyouya quite well, because she is likely to absorb some of his qualities.

Oh and re Tamaki trying to pass on his "skills" to Kyouya- I think you have a potential comic gem there XD

Thanks for the good read!

oceansex January 26 2010, 01:24:20 UTC

I'm glad neither of them came off as OOC (since I spend so little time in Ouran fandom as of late, that's my number one fear!) and that Haruhi's reaction felt appropriate. :)

this Tamaki teaching Kyouya the art of wooing fic is probably going to kill me with lulz if I ever actually write it. XD

and thank you for your review ♥