[fic post] Merit

[oceansex]

Title: Merit
Rating: G
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Pairings or Characters: Kyouya/Haruhi
Warnings: ridiculous amounts of fluff
Word Count: 741
Summary: Most would be taken aback when the woman they were proposing to demanded an explanation for it. Kyouya had figured she would ask and had prepared an answer in advance.
Author Notes: For teh_amazing_one. My handle on

Comments

[peekaydee]

awwww reveychu you gave me diabeetus againnnnn

[oceansex]

THAT'S MY JOB >8D

[mochalatt3]

I really liked this. It felt very in character and was really sweet :)

[oceansex]

thank you! glad to hear it. x)

[a_lifestyle]

"What is it?" she asks, unaware of what it could be in a way that only Haruhi could manage.

My teeth hurt. This was so sweet. I especially loved the way you wrote Haruhi here. Adorable.

[oceansex]

teeth-rotting sweetness is kind of what always happens when I end up writing Ouran fic. XD;;;

I'm very happy you liked the way I portrayed Haruhi, since she's the hardest of the host clubbers to write well. ♥

[nicluv1787]

You did a good job keeping them both in Character especially Haruhi, when I was reading her dialog I could imagine her voice from the Anime, her reactions were really in character too.

[oceansex]

thank you! that's a gigantic compliment. *____* ♥

[zotlot]

I love how you can actually hear their voices saying these things... although, with Kyouya's lovely list of merits, could he possibly have been taking classes about complimenting girls from Tamaki?

[oceansex]

... curse you. now I think I may have to write Tamaki trying to pass on his skills to Kyouya and it failing hilariously, lol.