Torchwood fic: Lost (Part Two)

Nov 25, 2006 18:16

“Coffee, sir?”

Jack starts, changing windows on his computer screen with the deft click-click of the guilty (page of text flickering from view), and swirls around on his swivel chair as he composes a toothy grin.  “Ianto!  Haven’t you gone home yet?  It’s late.  When are you going to leave me alone to watch some porn?”

To Jack’s slight chagrin, ( Read more... )

pterodactyl, adult material, fanfiction, jack, male/male, torchwood, ianto, ianto/jack, jack/ianto, swearing, shameless porn

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notevery November 28 2006, 22:43:51 UTC
My pleasure! It's great to hear that you enjoyed it so much. I aim to please, and all that!

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ladykoori November 25 2006, 21:40:24 UTC
Very lovely.

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notevery November 28 2006, 22:44:47 UTC
Thank you!

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burntcopper November 25 2006, 21:57:28 UTC
oh, nice one. (she says admiringly, whilst surreptitiously reaching for the ice bucket)

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notevery November 28 2006, 22:45:26 UTC
It's great to hear that you liked it so much! Cheers for the review.

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elfinessy November 25 2006, 23:12:34 UTC
That's wonderful. The sex is incredible and afterwards... I just want to hug Ianto hard and keep him safe. LOVE that Jack shares with Ianto about the Doctor... :-) This is what I love so much about Torchwood - that there's a connection outside the 'Torchwood' show, one that's canon, linked with another show, and that Jack's the link but Ianto's becoming his anchor on Earth.

Lovely writing, I hope there'll be more from you...?

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notevery November 28 2006, 22:46:49 UTC
There should be! I have several ideas and one longer Torchwood fic in the works at the moment. Watch this space!

Thank you for the lovely review!

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pet_lunatic November 25 2006, 23:29:33 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous...I love their reactions to each other, the way everything they do, even when they're trying to get closer to each other, is tinged with anger and fear. Beautiful.

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notevery November 28 2006, 22:48:07 UTC
Thank you very much! It's especially good to hear that I managed to convey the sense of conflicting emotions I was aiming for: I don't think that any relationship between two such essentially mucked up characters could ever go entirely smoothly.

Thank you again!

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