Does anyone feel like beta reading a fic for me? It's a filthy piece of Tosh/Andy pr0n that jumped on me out of the blue. More het for Torchwood, pls!
I think my grammar and spelling are usually pretty solid, so the areas I'm most looking for help with would be:
- Andy's voice/consistent viewpoint
- momentum
And, uhm, whether it's hot or not. Because
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