Fic: What you wish for

[notevery]

Title: What You Wish For
Ratings & warnings: Adult (explicit sexual content, language).  Very light D/s & bondage.
Characters: Tosh/PC Andy
Spoilers: None.  Zip.  Nada.
Beta:pocketmouse, who put up admirably with my inappropriate 3 AM reference to How Doth the Little Crocodile.
Wordcount: ~5,600
Author's Note: They're not directly quoted, but I had two snippets in

Comments

[xtricks]

Oooh. Lovely! And hot! And het! And D/s. All good!

I thought there was a nice revelation of the character's personalities, even though we see nothing, really, of their lives.

[notevery]

Thank you! I actually had totally unnecessary amounts of background information in my head at the time. Way more than a PWP needed.

Torchwood needs more het. And f/f. Not that I'm complaining about slash--because, er, yum--but I've always been keen on a bit of variety.

[reefgirluk]

Bloody Hellfire that was hot

[notevery]

I'm glad, and thank you!

[lone_star_woman]

I love this pairing. I always wanted to see Andy and Tosh together on the show because Andy would have totally worshiped Tosh like she deserved.

So hot. Great fic!

[notevery]

I totally agree--I think they'd have a really lovely dynamic. (Or I guess I should say they would have had a really lovely dynamic. Months on and I still haven't quite adjusted to the fact that Tosh is dead.)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear that you liked it.

[azdaja_dafema]

Oh, I like it! There were some lovely lines in this - the constant reminder of the tap and the window bringing the room into full focus, the "Ring my Bell" connected to Pavlov made me giggle, and what was the other thing? *looks up*

Oh yes; the naturalness of the sex: the thought out little things that made it - the fact that when Andy reaches down it's awkward because it's the wrong hand. Such a human thing it almost made it.

Also, meow. Nice work Tosh.

[notevery]

Oooh, that was a nice surprise to see your name! I'm glad that you liked it :) I was really going for that human element in this, so it's good to hear that it worked. Quite a lot of fic treats 'hot' and 'realistic' as an either/or thing, and I wanted to go against that. It can be clumsy and filled with inappropriate cultural references and still be sexy :P

I swear, if anyone ever unlaced Tosh she'd be a sex kitten.

It just may take a lot of unlacing.

[azdaja_dafema]

Twas nice seeing you too!
And I agree re unlacing of Tosh. Or maybe am just heartily in favour of it. :P

At the moment I've been submerged in Merlin fic of all things! Still in the same fandom haunts?

[notevery]

Yes, I am--I don't want enough TV to end up anywhere else!

What is 'Merlin' like? I never saw any.

[invisible_lift]

*blink*

...

This wins so much it has its own gravity. Fuuh.

[notevery]

:D Thanks. There needs to be more Tosh/Andy (and, actually, just more Andy) in the world.