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Fic: What you wish for

Jan 08, 2009 17:57

Title: What You Wish For
Ratings & warnings: Adult (explicit sexual content, language). Very light D/s & bondage.
Characters: Tosh/PC Andy
Spoilers: None. Zip. Nada.
Beta:pocketmouse, who put up admirably with my inappropriate 3 AM reference to How Doth the Little Crocodile.
Wordcount: ~5,600
Author's Note: They're not directly quoted, but I had two snippets in ( Read more... )

18, torchwood, toshiko, pwp, fanfiction, pc andy

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azdaja_dafema January 9 2009, 00:18:50 UTC

Oh, I like it! There were some lovely lines in this - the constant reminder of the tap and the window bringing the room into full focus, the "Ring my Bell" connected to Pavlov made me giggle, and what was the other thing? *looks up*

Oh yes; the naturalness of the sex: the thought out little things that made it - the fact that when Andy reaches down it's awkward because it's the wrong hand. Such a human thing it almost made it.

Also, meow. Nice work Tosh.

notevery January 10 2009, 13:58:22 UTC

Oooh, that was a nice surprise to see your name! I'm glad that you liked it :) I was really going for that human element in this, so it's good to hear that it worked. Quite a lot of fic treats 'hot' and 'realistic' as an either/or thing, and I wanted to go against that. It can be clumsy and filled with inappropriate cultural references and still be sexy :P

I swear, if anyone ever unlaced Tosh she'd be a sex kitten.

It just may take a lot of unlacing.

azdaja_dafema January 11 2009, 14:58:33 UTC

Twas nice seeing you too!
And I agree re unlacing of Tosh. Or maybe am just heartily in favour of it. :P

At the moment I've been submerged in Merlin fic of all things! Still in the same fandom haunts?

notevery January 17 2009, 19:53:45 UTC

Yes, I am--I don't want enough TV to end up anywhere else!

What is 'Merlin' like? I never saw any.

azdaja_dafema January 17 2009, 22:09:22 UTC

Merlin is fantabulous, with both crackyness and Much with the Slash, as Merlin and Arthur, after overcoming their dislike of each other would die for each other, and try to, rather a lot. There's also a dragon under the castle who keeps saying that they're two sides to the same coin and entwined. Also, MANSERVANT. And much sword play, and snark ( ... )

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