Torchwood fic: Lost (Part Two)

[notevery]

“Coffee, sir?”

Jack starts, changing windows on his computer screen with the deft click-click of the guilty (page of text flickering from view), and swirls around on his swivel chair as he composes a toothy grin.  “Ianto!  Haven’t you gone home yet?  It’s late.  When are you going to leave me alone to watch some porn?”

To Jack’s slight chagrin,

Comments

[tonko]

I love the end. Everything's not perfect, there're still traumas and ragged edges, but maybe it's a little better than before.

I liked when Ianto got angry enough to pin Jack down. Really liked. HOT. ::fans self:: Ianto oughta do that more.

And this:
After its night on the floor the garment is crumpled, creased: in it, Ianto feels more revealed, more vulnerable, more naked than he ever felt last night - last night when Jack was thrusting into him, groaning against his ear, last night when Jack came deep inside of him and they collapsed together in a puddle of limp limbs and come, when Ianto fell asleep with Jack’s hand lazily stroking his belly.

alksfghdjgslkfj sorry, I broken now. Too much hot.

[subtly_modded]

what they *points up* said. thank you thank you!

[notevery]

My pleasure! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[notevery]

Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! It's great to hear that you liked it.

(And I concur: Jack/Ianto is astoundingly hot. If it never becomes canon, I'm going to have to go and mount a protest outside the BBC HQ.)

[hinsoullai]

WOW. That was.. so.. wow. You made me switch 'ships now! Used to be Jack/Gwen but now, it's Jack/Ianto all the way.. XD

[notevery]

*laughs* Thank you very much for the compliment! Being a multi-shipper myself, though, I can't advocate leaving Jack/Gwen out in the cold: they'd be great together! The trick is to want every pairing, and then you never get disappointed...

[keiko_kichi]

-grins contentedly-

Day-yum, that's hot.

(Sorry for sounding like Paris Hilton o_O)

[notevery]

I can forgive you! Thanks for the lovely review.

[kaj_22]

I am so willing to give up limbs and stuff for more of this! Absolutely fantastic writing, capturing the two so perfectly. Could you maybe petition the BBC to be let on the scriptwriting team?

[notevery]

Thank you very much for such a flattering review! It totally made my day.

(Careful, though, or my ego will reach dangerous proportions!)

[shara50]

That was really good, thanks for such a great story.

[notevery]

My pleasure! It's great to hear that you enjoyed it.