Torchwood fic: Lost (Part Two)

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“Coffee, sir?”

Jack starts, changing windows on his computer screen with the deft click-click of the guilty (page of text flickering from view), and swirls around on his swivel chair as he composes a toothy grin.  “Ianto!  Haven’t you gone home yet?  It’s late.  When are you going to leave me alone to watch some porn?”

To Jack’s slight chagrin,

Comments

[coffeegirl18]

OK so I combined my posts since I missed some parts I wanted to mention originally...

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Oh God...*reads again*

The way that Jack is looking at him makes Ianto just as nervous as it makes him aroused. Crouched in the middle of the kitchen, they are close enough together for Ianto to feel Jack’s breath on his skin; close enough to be almost touching; close enough for Jack’s eyes to be the most amazingly piercing blue Ianto has ever seen. Close enough to fall into each other and sink without a sound or a protest. In the late-night Hub, silence is absolute but for their breathing; the faint crunch of glass under Jack’s boot as he leans forward, slides his hand behind Ianto’s head, and kisses him.

The anticipation....*loves*

That part was just so hot and the Ianto pressing Jack into the floor and the shivergasping . Just...GUH...THUD. *falls off chair from the well written smuttiness*

Loved the ending as well the whole Jack actually shared something very personal with Ianto. Nice aliteration Sinful slick slither-

[notevery]

They say that anticipation and seduction are the sexiest parts of sex: I hope I managed to convey something of that.

Thank you very much for taking the time to review! It's great to hear what you thought of the fic. (And I wouldn't complain about Ianto/Jack on screen. At all.)

[cosmic]

Oh yes. Very, very, very good. Excellent.

[notevery]

Thank you!

[madskellig]

Yay! Such a wonderful story, I loved the ending :)

[notevery]

I'm glad! Cheers for the review.

[adafrog]

Adore this fic. Very well done, working in Ianto's probable reaction to it all.

[notevery]

Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear you liked it.

[marag]

Very nicely done. I like the non-fluffiness, the way it's hard to tell where it's going, what they're going to do.

[notevery]

Thank you! I'm glad I managed to convey the complexity I see in this pairing. Tormented, bereaved secretary/tormented, abandoned immortal just can't go smoothly.