Comments | notevery: Torchwood: Priority Call

notevery

Torchwood: Priority Call

Oct 22, 2007 11:27

Title: Priority Call
Rating & Warnings: 18/NC-17. Graphic sex. PWP.
Characters: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None
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18, torchwood, jack/ianto, shameless porn, nc-17

Comments 91

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likestowrite October 22 2007, 11:43:54 UTC

I second that! I think Ianto would up the kink factor...

notevery October 23 2007, 10:17:29 UTC

I can totally imagine that too!

notevery October 23 2007, 10:16:54 UTC

I'm really glad to hear it! & Ianto's response is definitely something I've been intending to write. Can't have too much Jack/Ianto porn.

likestowrite October 22 2007, 11:42:15 UTC

*Lies dead on the floor*
Bloody hell!
Indescribably hot! Your descriptions of the pair are amazing; i particularly like the idea of Jack's cheeks flushed with arousal. *fans oneself*

(Oh and i love your icon tosh/NM looks so beautiful in that pic)

notevery October 23 2007, 10:19:19 UTC

Thank you so much! It's great to hear that you enjoyed it, and of course brilliant to hear that it was as hot as I intended it to be! I find writing what's basically porn pretty hard, since I can never quite judge if anyone apart from me is going to find it hot... I'm glad it worked!

(I adore Naoko Mori--she's beautiful. This Tosh icon was made by straykim and I'm in love with it.)

rubydreamer October 22 2007, 12:47:15 UTC

Shit, how am I going to sleep now. Ah I know, thinking about those two.

Bloody hot...thank you.

notevery October 23 2007, 10:20:08 UTC

Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you liked it.

moonystone October 22 2007, 13:06:36 UTC

Goodness, that was hot! *fans self* I really liked the way it developed from the chat to the phone call to the action. Wow. Ianto's calling Jack "sir" throuhout the whole thing ups the kink factor even more.

notevery October 23 2007, 10:21:45 UTC

I'm so glad to hear that! I can never decide if the porn I write is going to work or not, so it's great to hear it did--and especially that the development you commented on was there; I had a really strong idea of this slow building progression through the three scenelets.

(And yeah, the 'sir' thing? Phoar. Every time Ianto calls Jack 'sir' a little bit of me melts.)

bioathens October 22 2007, 13:25:26 UTC

*ignites*

The beginning was really funny, with when Jack leaves the conversation. And the rest was so fucking hot. It makes me think of "Touch" by cyberamanda, except this time it's Jack being the evil one… haha! Mmmmmmm.

the_dark_side October 23 2007, 01:58:24 UTC

notevery October 23 2007, 10:23:43 UTC

Thank you so much--that's a really flattering comparison! I'm so glad to hear you found the beginning funny, too; I wasn't sure if a PWP fic was the right place for humour at first, and I was really hesitant about leaving it in.