Torchwood: Priority Call

[notevery]

Title: Priority Call
Rating & Warnings: 18/NC-17.  Graphic sex.  PWP.
Characters: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None
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Comments

[notevery]

Thank you so much!

[unfeathered]

Mmmm, very hot. I love how strong the visuals are in your writing here. Some very lovely images! :-)

[unfeathered]

Sorry, forgot (in all the hotness!) to mention I spotted one tiny little typo near the end:

sees starts over his eyes and comes so hard-- - I'm fairly sure he's seeing 'stars' not 'starts'? *g*

[notevery]

Thank you very much! I'm really glad someone pointed that out, I'm terrible at catching misplaced words--my mind just inserts the right one. Fixed :)

[unfeathered]

No problem. I see 'em, I point 'em out! *g*

That one's a really common one to mistype anyway - well, it is for me!

[the_dark_side]

[notevery]

Thank you so much! It's always really flattering to hear that the voices worked. And as for making your day--my pleasure entirely!

[beguiled_child]

My god, you write the hottest and most beautiful fics, this one especially. I've read some before of yours and loved them as well.

Your Jack is so incredibly commanding and strong btw, it's utterly gorgeous. As is Ianto of course, but Jack really stood out for me.

I will certainly always look forward to your writing in the future, I adore it!

[notevery]

Thank you so so much for such an amazing comment! Honestly, I'm so flattered I don't know what to say. I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed this fic and the others, and I only hope that you'll like future ones as much!

(I love commanding Jack too; it comes so naturally to him, and it's so unbelievably hot.)

[midknight2501]

Hot. Oh man, that was HOT.

[notevery]

Thank you!