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morgenwrites

love in the time of science - chapter eleven (part 2)

Mar 08, 2009 17:43

This is Part 2. Please read Part 1 first.

Title: Love in the Time of Science
Author: Morgen
Summary: Love. Tragedy. The things we’ve left unsaid. This is their story. Set after episode 5.05.
Disclaimer: I am not famous. I do not own TV shows. I am a poor college student with a laptop and a serious procrastination habit.
Rating: Written for grownups ( Read more... )

love in the time of science, mer/der, fanfic, grey's anatomy

Comments 31

lemonfirefly March 12 2009, 08:41:14 UTC

{Maybe this was how married people fought too. With slammed down cups and furiously scrubbed plates. Silences that said a lot ( ... )

morgenwrites March 12 2009, 20:15:56 UTC

First of all, thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked the chapter ( ... )

lemonfirefly March 13 2009, 09:29:07 UTC

[clearly I fail today]

Oh, come on. NO! I just wasn't sure where you were going with that, is all. It's pretty much what I was expecting, because she didn't yell quite so much or get quite so defensive. So I was kind of thinking that she was being flippant and sexified and so it appears I was kind of on the right track. :P

[I'm glad you liked the whole table juxtaposition thingy]

Yes. Juxtaposition. That is what I meant by 'whooshy'. Glad you got that :D Stuff about past and present and future possibilities all going... whoosh. Hee.

Wow, this is waaay short for me, huh? I think I'm going to stop here and save up some ramble credit for future comments. :)

morgenwrites March 13 2009, 17:41:15 UTC

Yay. I'm very relieved to know I still make some kinda sense. :D

Hee. Whooshy. Yes. I rather liked the word. I was hoping juxtaposition meant what I thought it did, and I think I'm right.

Also, are you back to watching Grey's as it airs yet? Because last night. Ohhhhh last nighttttttt. But I'll say nothing in case you haven't seen it.

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meredithq March 12 2009, 13:26:30 UTC

Wow, Morgen. This was amazing. The character development, and the talking, and inner monologues of Mer-ness....all of it. Oh yeah, and the sex too. I really liked the weaving together of Ellis' suicide attempt, Meredith's memories of that day, and the love scene. Pure genius.

I also loved that they talked about Rose. I've always had this feeling that Derek didn't realize how devastated Meredith was during that time. And I still kind of hate Derek for yelling all of those nasty things at Meredith after Jeremy died...so having them talk about Rose was a very good thing.

Also, I am loving the fact that although they are talking, they are still sort of in angst-land, but they are there together. The end of this chapter was very...ominous. "She'd cast her vote for the one that swallowed her whole"? That gives me chills...

There were many many other things that I love, but I'm too incoherent to mention them. You are the queen and I bow down to you.

Happy Grey's day!
Meredith

morgenwrites March 12 2009, 20:27:26 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it. :D ( ... )

anonymous March 28 2009, 05:49:46 UTC

oy im dyin here. can we pretty pretty please have a new chapter soon? dont know how im gonna make it through this month long GA hiatus...not after the epic epsiode from last night..

morgenwrites March 28 2009, 17:27:55 UTC

There'll be a new chapter soonish. I've finally finished the rough draft, and now I just have to edit it. Hopefully I'll be able to get it up in a day or two. Thanks for being patient!! :)