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love in the time of science - chapter eleven (part 2)

Mar 08, 2009 17:43

This is Part 2. Please read Part 1 first.

Title: Love in the Time of Science
Author: Morgen
Summary: Love. Tragedy. The things we’ve left unsaid. This is their story. Set after episode 5.05.
Disclaimer: I am not famous. I do not own TV shows. I am a poor college student with a laptop and a serious procrastination habit.
Rating: Written for grownups ( Read more... )

love in the time of science, mer/der, fanfic, grey's anatomy

Comments 31

dirtymistress11 March 9 2009, 15:27:05 UTC

Y'know I'm kinda proud of Meredith too, for talking. Talking is hard cause it means realising people can't just read what you're thinking by looking at your face. Even though Derek gets as close as possible in this part.

They are sexy together. Derek is especially sexy and I love that Mer sees that:

His shirt was turning his eyes almost criminally blue, and the whole five o’clock shadow thing he had going on was making her toes curl in her boots.

Also liked how the kitchen went from being the scene of her mother's attempted non-suicide to being something for them.

Well done for all the thousands of words!

morgenwrites March 9 2009, 20:14:47 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you're proud of Mer for the talking. She is trying to get better at it. She's spent so much of her life doing the not communicating thing, but I think all the talking is good for her!

Oh sexy Derek. Hee. He's so very delicious. One of my favorite Mer moments this season is when Sadie's met Derek and says he's hot, and Mer does this giddy, giggly "I know, right!" Because he's freaking gorgeous and we don't get to see that much of Mer drooling over him.

And I'm so glad you liked the transformation of the kitchen this chapter!! I think Mer needed it. I can't even imagine eating breakfast every morning in a room where my mother slit her wrists. It's crazy and I'd be totally freaked out by it. But it is very Mer to just keep living there.

Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback!! :D

myflower March 9 2009, 17:30:13 UTC

OMG that was amazing.

Just perfect.

The first part was incredible and this porny one was so so hotttt. You need to write more of it lolol

ly <3

morgenwrites March 9 2009, 20:16:08 UTC

Aw thank you so much!!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

And that the porny part was hot. (I'm always nervous about the porny bits!)

Thanks for reading! :D :D :D

lili_23_2005 March 9 2009, 18:14:09 UTC

I loved it.So much communication, in 24 hours they talked about her mother's suicide, her drowning, therapy and Rose and the clinical trial.wow. And then they had sex, it doesn't get any better.

I'm looking forward to the angst, I actually enjoy the angst as long as it's not done by Shonda.

morgenwrites March 9 2009, 20:20:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Yeah, this fic is pretty much just a big checklist of issues I want MerDer to talk about. Because they drive me crazy with all the things they never discuss!

I'm glad you're looking forward to the angst! I'm keeping my fingers crossed that I can pull it off without it seeming like too much. Hopefully you'll like it!

Thanks for reading. I really appreciate the feedback! :D

anonymous March 11 2009, 02:34:09 UTC

what if I like your weird and freaky.....who knew these were the hottest words ever? love it

morgenwrites March 11 2009, 02:49:03 UTC

Hee. I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading!! :D :D :D

anonymous March 11 2009, 02:53:53 UTC

I'll be back later to comment more fully but just thought I'd say I really enjoyed this chapter!

Hollywood13

morgenwrites March 11 2009, 19:39:46 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)

anonymous March 12 2009, 21:46:09 UTC

haha. Ok. First off? Love that they did it with the boots. Aha, also, loved Mer's inner dialogue. Always exceptionally amusing ( ... )

morgenwrites March 13 2009, 17:39:17 UTC

Thank you so much! And I'm so glad you like that they kept the boots on. Hee. :D

Yeah, the parallels between Meredith and Sarah. Mer, Der and Sarah are all going to end up very intertwined in a way. And the similarities are definitely not helping Derek. He's crazy invested in her case.

I'm so glad the communication between Mer and Der seems realistic. I didn't want to make them suddenly able to talk about everything because I do think there should be some learning there, especially for Mer. It's all so new for her, and even when it's something she theoretically wants to do, it's still hard for her. So I'm glad the gradual process is working for you!

And song recs!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay! :D :D :D I'm going to go youtube them now! I love finding new music.