Comments | lunatron: 28 Needlenoses

lunatron

28 Needlenoses

May 23, 2007 14:14

Bring it.

1. Naughty Needlenose - claimed by sapphirebreeze
2. Happy Needlenose
3. Silly Needlenose - claimed by sapphirebreeze
4. Angsty Needlenose
5. On-Vacation Needlenose - claimed by sapphirebreeze
6. Horny Needlenose - claimed by dualistic
7. Transforming Needlenose
8. Excited Needlenose
9. Book-Reading Needlenose - claimed by raisedbymoogles
10. Dancing Needlenose - claimed by koilungfish, with his Nebulans ( Read more... )

character: needlenose, writing: fanfic, writing: 28s

Comments 126

beckyh2112 May 23 2007, 18:18:55 UTC

Well-Shagged Needlenose with Spinister, pleases.

lunatron June 17 2007, 02:07:43 UTC

26. Well-Shagged Needlenose with SpinisterSpinister was out cold. He had no endurance for love-making, and to satisfy himself, Needlenose had to wear the helicopter all the way out. Needlenose sighed and looked up at the ceiling. Spinister was learning, although Needlenose was impatient over his lover's slowness about it ( ... )

koilungfish July 4 2007, 21:37:29 UTC

Hmm hmm hmm. Nice, but lacks a certain something in the resolution. Not sure what though. I see the Targetmasters continue to suffer, heh.

So, why is Spinister so lacking in endurance? Lack of experience, or something else?

lunatron July 4 2007, 21:45:14 UTC

Hmm hmm hmm. Nice, but lacks a certain something in the resolution. Not sure what though. I see the Targetmasters continue to suffer, heh.

These are just minifics. If it was a proper story, there'd be more to it. The Targetmasters do indeed.

So, why is Spinister so lacking in endurance? Lack of experience, or something else?

There is that. There is also that Needlenose runs on a fusion reactor. He could make love for a million years and not get tired. Of course, he'd need a partner like Shockwave.

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raisedbymoogles May 23 2007, 18:24:09 UTC

Book-reading Needlenose, please?

lunatron June 17 2007, 02:08:48 UTC

9. Book-Reading NeedlenoseNeedlenose was hunched over his worktable, his fine tweezers out. He had to be very delicate, or the small object would tear. Needlenose would tell anyone that he was so engrossed in his activity that he didn't notice Spinister slip in and take up hovering, metaphorically, over his shoulder. Of course, anyone would tell him that Needlenose wouldn't have noticed Spinister if he'd spent the time staring at the door and set up a monomolecular tripwire ( ... )

raisedbymoogles June 17 2007, 02:14:42 UTC

....You have made me a happy moogle. ^_^

lunatron June 17 2007, 02:20:49 UTC

Aww, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

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sapphirebreeze May 23 2007, 21:10:07 UTC

Kick-Ass Needlenose and On-Vacation Needlenose, please.

By the by, you notice that 22 is At The Beach Blitzwing, not Needlenose?

lunatron June 17 2007, 02:09:38 UTC

27. Kick-Ass NeedlenoseOctopunch, Stranglehold, and Bludgeon covered the ground, turning it pink with the slain. Spinister could have been anywhere, and he probably was. Needlenose was in the sky, right where he belonged. That they even let him take flight meant that he was chasing down an aerial opponent, but he was fine enough with the task. He was still more comfortable with aerial combat than he'd ever be with infantry-work ( ... )

koilungfish July 4 2007, 21:42:49 UTC

*Nice*. Needlenose gets to be a show-off, a bit of a braggart, and a competant warrior *and* get screen-time with Spinister all in one go. I approve.

lunatron July 4 2007, 21:49:29 UTC

Thank you. I enjoy writing fight scenes. :)

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Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D lunatron June 17 2007, 02:10:28 UTC

14. On-His-Knees NeedlenoseNeedlenose knelt, hands shackled behind him. He was trying very hard not to start sobbing. He wondered if it showed. Needlenose felt as if the other Decepticons, the real Decepticons could see right through him, to his quivering little core ( ... )

Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D koilungfish July 4 2007, 21:46:11 UTC

Heheh. Not sure exactly why Needlenose is being flogged, but I really like the last line. Excellent.

Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D lunatron July 4 2007, 21:59:42 UTC

Well, Needlenose is in Basic. His unit needed him, and he instead hid in a foxhole. So they all died, with the strong implication that more would have lived if he hadn't been a little wussy boy. This is why he's being flogged.

I'm really happy with the last line.

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ravenclaw_devi May 24 2007, 01:06:53 UTC

Caring Needlenose with Spinister, please.

lunatron July 2 2007, 01:18:41 UTC

13. Caring Needlenose"Spinister's the ranking officer here, isn't he?" Optimus Prime studied a datapad, his look thoughtful ( ... )

sapphirebreeze July 2 2007, 01:34:31 UTC

Aw! Sweet!

And I like how this follows on the last one. :)

lunatron July 4 2007, 18:00:15 UTC

Thank you. Decepticons who care about each other are fun.

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