What I Owe You

Oct 18, 2010 13:59

Title: What I Owe You
Word count: 200
Characters/pairings: Dawn, Spike, Buffy
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Spike does Buffy a favour; then Dawn does one for him.
Warnings: angst, attempted rape references
Challenge: favour
Disclaimer: The boys and girls belong to Joss, even though I’m often much nicer to them than he is.
Author’s Notes: This was written ( Read more... )

drabbles, gen

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Comments 17

ouronlylight October 18 2010, 14:51:51 UTC
Very nice! The first one is very cute (silly Dawn, Passions was greatness!) and the second one is so lovely. Poor Dawn, learning the hard way how it feels to have your trust betrayed.

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lokifan October 19 2010, 09:34:42 UTC
Hee, thanks! And yeah, poor Dawn - she has it tough!

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staringiscaring October 18 2010, 18:49:18 UTC
Great last line. You captured Dawn well.

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lokifan October 19 2010, 09:32:13 UTC
Thanks! And your icon is AWESOME.

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staringiscaring October 19 2010, 09:33:32 UTC
Thanks. I didn't make it but sure do love that gator.

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il_mio_capitano October 18 2010, 19:26:41 UTC
Great stuff. Love that last line.

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lokifan October 19 2010, 09:32:40 UTC
Thank you so much!

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murielle October 18 2010, 20:51:37 UTC
Beautiful! Loved them both. First one was adorable, the second heart-breakingly true.

You've got the voices down pat.

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lokifan October 19 2010, 09:34:10 UTC
Thank you! :) I love the Spike/Dawn relationship - even in S7, because I like that Dawn refuses to let what Spike did be okay. But it huuuurts my heart :((

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murielle October 19 2010, 18:08:56 UTC
I've been a devoted spuffy from way back. I love their relationship, cannon and fandom.

If it's okay with you, I'd like to "friend" you.
I'd love to keep reading your Spike/Buffy or Spike, Buffy fics.

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lokifan October 20 2010, 01:35:12 UTC
Hee, I didn't mean I like the Spike/Dawn relationship to be sexual (although I wrote Spike/Dawn once. It was not very good.) And yeah, friend away! :) I've written a little Buffy/Spike and new friends = always good!

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kudagirl October 18 2010, 22:32:43 UTC
Very nice. I loved Dawn and Spike's relationship. It made me sad when she was so angry with him. They both suffered because of it.

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lokifan October 19 2010, 09:35:48 UTC
Thanks! I loved that relationship too - even though I like that Dawn doesn't let what Spike did be okay, it paaaains me that they never make friends again.

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