Those Forsaken Ch. 4

[leeayre]

Author: Leeayre
Title: Those Forsaken
Rating: T (chps 1-4), M (5+) ?
Genre: Angst/Horror
Characters: Subaru, Seishirou, Kamui, Fuuma
Summary: It all started when Subaru accidentally brought one home. Now Kamui and Subaru find themselves running for their lives, wrapped up in a fight neither could have foreseen.
Warnings: Vampirism, blood, physical

Comments

[jjblue1]

Undoubtely this chapter, devoted to my beloved pair, is so far my favourite. But let's get in with order

[leeayre]

A-A REVIEW?! This can’t be from JJ… I’m dreaming… I’ll close my eyes, and when I wake up it will all have been a really pleasant dream… *blinks owlishly* Hmm, it’s not going away… *pokes it… as if that’ll help* There’s no way… Maybe… *horrified* Maybe she meant to review someone else and accidentally mixed up profiles! I mean, after all… she can’t… she wouldn’t… there’s no way she actually ‘meant’ to give one to meee! *squeaks* o//o

PART 1

[jjblue1]

Don't worry, it's from me! And you deserved it, be sure of it! (it was just LJ was being difficult and refused to let me post it

[leeayre]

Ah, yes, you hit exactly on the problem I’m having with Kamui. He ‘should’ be more forceful and fiery, but right now, if he fought Fuuma, he’d only get seriously hurt again. He doesn’t yet have the strength to openly oppose and ‘win’ a fight with any of the other characters (Poor Kamui, stuck practically forever as the only pathetic human!). While it’s still going to be a bit before he can really show what he’s made of, chapter 6 will at least be his last chapter of ‘total’ helplessness. *hums a bit worriedly* I have been trying to find ways for ‘every’ character to get a moment to show his strength, even if only for a second. But Subaru is being difficult. He’s powerful, but giving him a reason to fight is the problem. I think… I think Subaru would fight if it meant protecting Seishirou, but… in order for him to have a need to protect Seishirou, Seishirou has to be unable to do anything (because otherwise I don’t think Seishirou would let him get in the way of a fight). *sudden smirk* But maybe I have an idea

[rose_erato]

I seconded that this is by far my favorite chapter! Seishiro and Subaru were so cute and sexy in this chapter. I definitely find your fic intriguing and I just want to keep reading it over and over.

[leeayre]

So many Sei/Su fans! *laughs* You're all going to kill me when I confess that I just switched around a scene in chapters 8 and 9 so that chapter 8 was not also a 'pure' Sei/Su chapter like this one! ^^; As of right now, chapter 4 is the only 'major' scene that has both Subaru and Seishirou, huh? They're both in ch. 6 at least, but even that has a lot more Seishirou and very little Subaru. I think ch. 7 is the next big chapter where there's equal (and quite lengthy) amounts of them both. ^_~

Ah, rose, I can't tell you how much I appreciate getting your comments! They cheer me up and make me excited about writing more! *_*