Plot fail.

[bialleyhoos]

Dear Author,

I'm reading your HPxKH fic! Yes, yours! There's lots about it I like. It's Cleon (stfu it's my crack pairing), for example. You make lots of Merlin jokes. (Specifically, the "Merlin's Beard!" "....We live with Merlin" joke.) And you set it during Order of the Phoenix, and made Cloud and Leon the DADA professors, thus getting rid of

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[kosmic_kinsei]

1) Professors McGonagall and Sprout would ABSOLUTLY NOT fangirl over Leon and Cloud. The thought of it is just......It makes me keyboard smash. Also, you wrote about them having a conversation about who would top, and make the first move. o___o I don't know enough about Sprout, but McGonagall would definitely not talk about that. AND NEITHER WOULD DUMBLEDORE. Look, I know he's gay, but seriously? I've come across that once in a yaoi fanfic. Only it was between two moms. They were both into talking and squealing over who would top and everything.

[taistoi]

Professors McGonagall and Sprout would ABSOLUTLY NOT fangirl over Leon and Cloud. The thought of it is just......It makes me keyboard smash.

That. I.

What? Yeah, okay, I'm keysmashing too. Just...

MINERVA MCGONAGALL DOES NOT APPROVE OF THIS SHIT

[bialleyhoos]

Reasons like that why I don't venture into the HP section of FF.N....

BUT SERIOUSLY. JUST, NO. FAIL. sdfkhsdf

[white_origami]

..................

I STOPPED AT THE MCGONAGALL AND FANGIRL PART.

[kitsuneasika]

...I'm torn between wanting to read it and running away. The jokes sound funny, but...McGonagall? Fangirling? Just no.

[bialleyhoos]

Me too. It's just, so good, but like two little details that make me want to stop..

Augh, fanfiction STOP BEING SO ADDICTING.

[herazi]

So many levels of fail...Would say something meaner, but I think the icon suffices rather well~