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moongoddesscyn in khfanficrants

Something About This Fic Sucks, And It's Not The Vampires

Oct 24, 2006 04:10

First of all, don't cram an author's note right into the middle of the text. It disrupts the flow. You want to go with the flow, yo.

Second:
Axel was wrong, when he faded, no, when everyone from the Orginazation faded, they went to a place, between all worlds amd became vampires. (Except Xenmas, Larxene, Saix and Xaldin cause i dont like them!) ( Read more... )

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princealia October 24 2006, 04:24:40 UTC

Well, Axel went to Hawaii, so I don't know WHERE they got that "between all worlds" crap from xD

But hell, given the choice, I'd love to go where Xemnas, Larxene, Saix and Xaldin went because being a vampire sounds like it sucks. You can only roam at night anyways D:

valorously October 24 2006, 04:31:06 UTC

♥

And think of the Scrabble tournaments! Those four would be INSANELY FUN (Erm. And horribly scary) to be cooped up with.

I'm not even going to get started on the game of Risk. >.>

princealia October 24 2006, 04:43:48 UTC

Well it's a good thing Axel became a vampire and can't participate because he'd totally pwn at scrabble. You know how he loves to spell stuff out because he thinks you're slow xD. Saix playing scrabble at night would be terribly frightning. Don't tell him that's not a word. Ooooh man....

They shouldn't play Axis and Allies either XDD

valorously October 24 2006, 05:10:10 UTC

He would win EVERY time. No contest. And then things would get dangerous because Larxene is there and.... I would not want to be in the same building, no siree. It's a good thing he's off sucking down blood! Possibly to the tune of some songfic somewhere.

I shudder to think of Xemnas playing Taboo. XD

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vilifier October 24 2006, 04:26:57 UTC

I weep that I can't lodge a brick between this person's eyes.

You can't just ditch characters! Look, I'm not the biggest fan of...say...Lexaeus, but I don't know anything about him so how can I actually make a judgement? But I would still try my hardest to do him justice. ARGH.

vilifier October 24 2006, 04:44:30 UTC

Oh, and just so everyone knows: It might behoove you to actually learn Roman numerals before attempting to use them.

13 in RN is XIII, not XII. *facepalm*

vilifier October 24 2006, 04:44:55 UTC

I'm speaking to this person, not to the people here...

valorously October 24 2006, 04:33:50 UTC

That's... a special form of stupid. Augh.

At least be a little more COVERT about surprise-surprise! ditching characters for no reason. Really now. It's what all the cool kids were doing for YEARS. ahfksldfsf

OH OH WOW! valorously October 24 2006, 05:49:21 UTC

My bad. I thought she hated Xemnas. ^^;

What IS Xenmas, though? Sounds like some sort of strange new holiday to meee.

Re: OH OH WOW! moongoddesscyn October 24 2006, 14:57:48 UTC

Xenmas is celebrated Novmeber 20th. It's the day of the year where everyone celebrates the zen-like balance we should try to achieve in life. Everyone carves pumpkins into jolly holiday shapes. Children get small presents, and if they were especially harmonious, Xemnaclause will leave them candy hearts in their pumpkin. If they were not harmonious, their heart gets devoured by Heartless.

Xemnaclause lives at the South Pole That Never Was, running a workshop full of Dusks who make toys for all the good girls and boys, with assistance from his Administrative Elves, Saix and Xigbar. If you listen really carefully on Xenmas Eve, you can hear Xemnaclause driving his sleigh full of toys, urging on his team of Nobodies. "On Larxene! On Xaldin! On Luxord! On Vexen! On Demyx! On Zexion! On Marluxia and Roxas!"

Xenmas is one of my favorite holidays. This year I'm going to ask Xemnaclause for a new plastic Keyblade, so I can be a Mary Sue too, and a pony, because I really want one.

Re: OH OH WOW! dark_puck October 24 2006, 15:04:38 UTC

For you, a shiny, brand-new internet!

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yuukihikari October 24 2006, 05:00:02 UTC

What are you talking about lil' miss fic author, Xenmas, Larxene, Saix and Xaldin are loved by you - it's a special kind of love called hate :D and I'm sure the feeling is mutual <3

That, and they know they wouldn't survive very long as vampires anyways, being "between all worlds" and all... where everyone's dead already D: sorta defeats the purpose. They'll have more fun having a good laugh at their associates expense, I'm certain.

... vampires *doesn't want to read*

yuukihikari October 24 2006, 05:11:48 UTC

Dhrrr I knew better than to read it too.

R&R please, but don't flame me...i'm sensitive

D:

DDDD:

Anyone who puts a clause "don't flame me" knows, somewhere deep down in their heart... they've done something wrong.

Yay! Sexy vampire yaoi !

Yeah... that kind of wrong.

____ero__sennin October 24 2006, 06:34:06 UTC

I'm just impressed she didn't shove Lexaeus, Vexen, and Luxord out of the fic. Assuming, of course, she remembers they exist.

blackstronghold October 24 2006, 13:42:56 UTC

Seconded. Seriously. o_O I wanna see vampire!Lexaeus (even if it means no vampire!Larx, who'd totally be into the whole psychological mind fuckery the gig came with).

schizo_niko October 25 2006, 00:17:02 UTC

She probably never played CoM and therefore has no idea Vex and Lex even exist.

Actually...people like this have probably not finished (if they've even started) any of the games. D:

Sad, sad world we live in.