Something About This Fic Sucks, And It's Not The Vampires

Oct 24, 2006 04:10

First of all, don't cram an author's note right into the middle of the text. It disrupts the flow. You want to go with the flow, yo.

Second:
Axel was wrong, when he faded, no, when everyone from the Orginazation faded, they went to a place, between all worlds amd became vampires. (Except Xenmas, Larxene, Saix and Xaldin cause i dont like them!) ( Read more... )

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princealia October 24 2006, 04:24:40 UTC
Well, Axel went to Hawaii, so I don't know WHERE they got that "between all worlds" crap from xD

But hell, given the choice, I'd love to go where Xemnas, Larxene, Saix and Xaldin went because being a vampire sounds like it sucks. You can only roam at night anyways D:

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valorously October 24 2006, 04:31:06 UTC


And think of the Scrabble tournaments! Those four would be INSANELY FUN (Erm. And horribly scary) to be cooped up with.

I'm not even going to get started on the game of Risk. >.>

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princealia October 24 2006, 04:43:48 UTC
Well it's a good thing Axel became a vampire and can't participate because he'd totally pwn at scrabble. You know how he loves to spell stuff out because he thinks you're slow xD. Saix playing scrabble at night would be terribly frightning. Don't tell him that's not a word. Ooooh man....

They shouldn't play Axis and Allies either XDD

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valorously October 24 2006, 05:10:10 UTC
He would win EVERY time. No contest. And then things would get dangerous because Larxene is there and.... I would not want to be in the same building, no siree. It's a good thing he's off sucking down blood! Possibly to the tune of some songfic somewhere.

I shudder to think of Xemnas playing Taboo. XD

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princealia October 24 2006, 05:28:29 UTC
Probably Evanescence *nods* And oh God, they'd fight over what was and wasn't a word. "That isn't a word, Axel!" "Says who?!" "Says ME!" "Who lost their heart to the darkness and made you the damn dictionary?" I'd run away real fast.

XD Xemnas and his extensive vocabulary over complicating the word to the point that no one gets it. Team Xemnas is gonna lose.

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valorously October 24 2006, 05:56:35 UTC
Really, there can be no other. Wouldn't want to depart from normality. XDDD And then all of a sudden the table is overturned and the little scrabble pieces are EVERYWHERE and now I REALLY REALLY want to see board game fanfic, for reals. *cackles*

He'd be TERRIBLE. And to see Xemnas GUESSING the word? Just as bad. Big words no one knows or cares about. Hand gestures. I'd hate to be on his side.

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princealia October 24 2006, 06:11:44 UTC
Well, sometimes for variety, he listens to Linkin Park *nods*. They're the other unofficial band, you know. Heee! And Xaldin is pissed because he totally had a big point word he could have made but they ruined it by overturning the table, so now there's scrabble pieces smacking everyone across the face due to the high intensity of wind in the room and it's just a huge mess XD
Organization XIII trying to play a board game together would be hell. Like monopoly. Oh God XD.

xD They'd all laugh at him for not getting it and he'd give them double the missions the next day. Pwn3d.

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valorously October 24 2006, 07:07:18 UTC
I wonder if he tried to get into Fort Minor but it just didn't feel the same. *snerk* It would be SO terrible. You don't want to anger Xaldin like that. He was totally sitting on that word the entire time and then... for this to happen? It's like all the times Mickey crashes the party. Hurricanes away!

Monopoly would be horrific. The game that never ends. Or never begins depending on whether anyone can agree on who gets what pewter piece. (This is like the crack that NEVER GETS WRITTEN. XDD)

And yet it is TOTALLY worth every SECOND of torturous mission detail to see Xemnas go all purple trying to win at Taboo. Priceless.

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yamikonumber7 October 24 2006, 08:41:38 UTC
QUIT. PLOTBUNNYING. ME. IN. THE. MIDDLE. OF. THE. NIGHT.

I have homework due tomorrow...*cries and tries feelby to fend off the onslaught of plotbunnies*

...aww, crap. *goes off to outline the Org!Scrabble fic*

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dark_puck October 24 2006, 15:03:40 UTC
I want a link to this when you're done! ^_^

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yamikonumber7 October 24 2006, 15:47:16 UTC
...assuming I ever get *started*, that is. *wince* It's on the list with FOUR other KHII fics I have waiting... ^^;

But I'll certainly link it should it ever get posted.

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lazzchan October 24 2006, 20:25:59 UTC
I have to second this. :)

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valorously October 25 2006, 18:50:52 UTC
I THIRD THIS EMOTION.

Horribly late, but adhfsafdslf. HAH. It's terrible that I am all a-yey. Plotbunnies that aren't entirely festing only my poor brain. XD

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