Something About This Fic Sucks, And It's Not The Vampires

[moongoddesscyn]

First of all, don't cram an author's note right into the middle of the text. It disrupts the flow. You want to go with the flow, yo.

Second:
Axel was wrong, when he faded, no, when everyone from the Orginazation faded, they went to a place, between all worlds amd became vampires. (Except Xenmas, Larxene, Saix and Xaldin cause i dont like them!)

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[yamikonumber7]

TROOOOOOLLLLLLLLL IN THE -
*checks author's profile, which has 5 fics*
...aw, CRAP.

And I noticed she used the forbidden "heart" line RIGHT AT THE BEGINNING.

Somebody please spork this piece of blaugh. I have a three-part Kairibash, a gender-bender, an Axel's!Other!Reno, and a Sister!Sue on my plate. I can't handle this too. DDDDDD:

[tafkae]

.... but WHY are they vampires? ;_;

[chaoticchicken]

Just IMAGINE the oral fantasies! :o!

[tafkae]

I'd rather not! <3

[schizo_niko]

I disregarded her 'don't flame me' plea and flamed. But I did it intellectually. I will speak very s-l-o-w-l-y and LOUDLY for you, honey, because you seem to be lacking a brain.

It's like a lightning bolt, just WHAM, the Org are Vampires, don't question it, it just happened. WHAM, I hate these characters, and I'm going to let my petty hatred get in the way of good writing. WHAM, I shall slam your silly head into a wall.

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[acronymed]

D: How can you NOT like Xenmas, Larxene, Saix & Xaldin?

That fic made my non-existent babies die. I love vampires. I love the concept of vampires.

I DO NOT LIKE WHEN VAMPIRES ARE USED FOR NO APPARENT REASON.
Gawsh, like, have a backstory at least.

There is a bright side to the lack of Xenmas, Larxene, Saix & Xaldin in the fic though. Now she can't call Xenmas "Mansex" rape their characters.