Bonjour I have arrived! (you get so many fucking friendship points if you know what I'm referring to. If you don't know you haven't watched this clip as much as I have and you clearly need to
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Another thing that I really liked was how proud kibum is of jonghyun and his skills and his passion for creating music and writing lyrics.And the emotions that flooded through him when jonghyun would serenade him and write songs and poetry about him and his feelings and their relationship. And I imagine one day in the future when companies buy more songs from him or when he sings his own and a company signs him up kibum will be so proud and soooo amazed that now thousands of people will be able to hear lyrics that were inspired by their relationship and by how jonghyun perceives kibum and all of his beauty
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This was the best thing I've ever read... I'm so glad I stayed up to wait, so glad you can do JongKey so perfectly. I don't want to say much here because someone might read the comments first and then I'll be the loser that spoiled it, but... Damn, you're talented.
I love, love, loved this and even if you're all done with this verse! I'm content, because they're together.
Thank you so so so much dear <3 I'm sorry you had to stay up late but I'm glad you thought it was worth it! Your comment's all too nice ;_; thank you so much I don't know if I'll ever write more for this verse, as usual I don't want to promise anything so only time will tell! I do have more ideas, though. It's my pleasure <3 thank you for reading this!
okay so i just finished this but i just want you to know that ater i read the last sentecne i lost my laptop to the floor, actually screamed and then fell down to the floor. the feels were seriously killing me from the inside out and this verse is the most precious thing ever and i can't comment right now, both because i don't have the time to write a comment this piece of art deserves, and also because i don't have the proper words to convey how i feel about this
so basicALLY GONNA COMMENT ON THIS LATER TONIGT AFTER I CALMED DOWN AND FINISH PACKING BECAUSE I AM STILL FUCKING NOT OVER THAT ENDING. FML. CONSIDER THIS THE SPOT OF THE SPOT???????? I WILL EDIT THIS COMMENT LATER OMFG THIS VERSE IS THE SOURCE OF MY BEING
OK I'M HERE I'M READY. i will comment from all the parts, because it is just one longfic???? like its not chaptered if you feel me? yes so i'll start with part 1 PART 1: Word count: ~20 700 I STARTED FREAKING OUT HERE He was frowning, hands folded together in front of him with his shoulders drawn in and Jonghyun didn’t need to look twice to know something was bothering him. my heart dropped already here and it was down in my stomach for the entire first part i seriusly felt unwell it was that bad omg Kibum’s gaze flitted away as he spoke those last words, and that was when Jonghyun felt his stomach drop. ;~; man i feel you jonghyun.. “London,” he said quietly, “England.” i think i felt just as bad as jonghyun here and also i applaud jongkey here bc so much clear coomunication i mean wow i felt so gad theyre the perfect couple and they always considers the others opinion. perfect tbh “Congratulations, babe,” he said, and meant it. omg jonghyun is so sweet to him >_> Kibum prepared him slowly on lubed fingers, kissing him throughout
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It was Kibum who had suggested that they sit down and “eat together”. Minho had somehow found out about their plans and proclaimed it the saddest date in history I ACTUALLY LAUGHED LOUDLY AT THIS MINHO YOU LITTLE SHIT OMG HAHAHAH. but also kibum's idea was actually really sweet ;~; I know you’ve been saving up for a future apartment.” “Our future apartment,” Jonghyun corrected *heart swelling* By the second week, Jonghyun was convinced that time zones sucked omg i snorted at this but i also feel bad for them???????
PART 2: (otl part 1 almost fit into one comment fml) kekekeke you might want to open it in private bday boy. YES I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING Jonghyun noticed a very obvious disappearance-that of Kibum’s favourite vibrating dildo, the one that had cost them a small fortune. MAN I LIKE PART 2 MORE AND MORE BY THE SECOND once he figured out that long distance dirty talk basically meant describing what he wanted to do to Kibum. jonghyun such a genius Their texts became more and more suggestive as Friday drew closeri could
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I love, love, loved this and even if you're all done with this verse! I'm content, because they're together.
Thank you for sharing with me.
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I don't know if I'll ever write more for this verse, as usual I don't want to promise anything so only time will tell! I do have more ideas, though.
It's my pleasure <3 thank you for reading this!
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so basicALLY GONNA COMMENT ON THIS LATER TONIGT AFTER I CALMED DOWN AND FINISH PACKING BECAUSE I AM STILL FUCKING NOT OVER THAT ENDING. FML. CONSIDER THIS THE SPOT OF THE SPOT???????? I WILL EDIT THIS COMMENT LATER OMFG THIS VERSE IS THE SOURCE OF MY BEING
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PART 1:
Word count: ~20 700 I STARTED FREAKING OUT HERE
He was frowning, hands folded together in front of him with his shoulders drawn in and Jonghyun didn’t need to look twice to know something was bothering him. my heart dropped already here and it was down in my stomach for the entire first part i seriusly felt unwell it was that bad omg
Kibum’s gaze flitted away as he spoke those last words, and that was when Jonghyun felt his stomach drop. ;~; man i feel you jonghyun..
“London,” he said quietly, “England.” i think i felt just as bad as jonghyun here
and also i applaud jongkey here bc so much clear coomunication i mean wow i felt so gad theyre the perfect couple and they always considers the others opinion. perfect tbh
“Congratulations, babe,” he said, and meant it. omg jonghyun is so sweet to him >_>
Kibum prepared him slowly on lubed fingers, kissing him throughout ( ... )
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I know you’ve been saving up for a future apartment.”
“Our future apartment,” Jonghyun corrected *heart swelling*
By the second week, Jonghyun was convinced that time zones sucked omg i snorted at this but i also feel bad for them???????
PART 2: (otl part 1 almost fit into one comment fml)
kekekeke you might want to open it in private bday boy. YES I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING
Jonghyun noticed a very obvious disappearance-that of Kibum’s favourite vibrating dildo, the one that had cost them a small fortune. MAN I LIKE PART 2 MORE AND MORE BY THE SECOND
once he figured out that long distance dirty talk basically meant describing what he wanted to do to Kibum. jonghyun such a genius
Their texts became more and more suggestive as Friday drew closeri could ( ... )
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