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astridminjichoi July 26 2014, 15:39:02 UTC
It was Kibum who had suggested that they sit down and “eat together”. Minho had somehow found out about their plans and proclaimed it the saddest date in history I ACTUALLY LAUGHED LOUDLY AT THIS MINHO YOU LITTLE SHIT OMG HAHAHAH. but also kibum's idea was actually really sweet ;~;
I know you’ve been saving up for a future apartment.”
“Our future apartment,” Jonghyun corrected *heart swelling*
By the second week, Jonghyun was convinced that time zones sucked omg i snorted at this but i also feel bad for them???????

PART 2: (otl part 1 almost fit into one comment fml)
kekekeke you might want to open it in private bday boy. YES I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING
Jonghyun noticed a very obvious disappearance-that of Kibum’s favourite vibrating dildo, the one that had cost them a small fortune. MAN I LIKE PART 2 MORE AND MORE BY THE SECOND
once he figured out that long distance dirty talk basically meant describing what he wanted to do to Kibum. jonghyun such a genius
Their texts became more and more suggestive as Friday drew closer ;))))))
i could quote their entire second cyper-sex scene but it would take forever and it wouldn't be worth anything because the only thing i have to add is I'M FUCKING DROOLING THI IS HOT
and the entire scene with jonghyun bening hammered i was all like plsplspls dont text kibum something stupid dont do anything stupid dont fuck this up you sappy kid. but fortunately jonghyun is an /amazing/ boyrfriend :D man i love their relationship in this fic
he was here, warm and solid beneath his palms i really like your choice of words
“Napping now, sex later?” AGREED
“Are you guys decent?” lmao i would ask that as well
He even leaned it to bite at Jonghyun’s ear, whispering a soft “Missed you,” when they turned onto a less busy street. jongkey getting all handsy because they missed each other dear god what did i do to deserve such a perfect fic
also the sex scene after this perfect reunited jongkey sex oh god
Jonghyun realized a beat late that his hand was still down Kibum’s pants, mid-grope. i swear taemin is literally never around but he managed to catch this lmao i feel bad for him

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astridminjichoi July 26 2014, 17:21:21 UTC
PART 3: (otl my comment aren't that high quality but i'm not that good with words other than LKJDFLJSDFSDLSDKFJSDLKJFSLKJFL???????)
now that “going to bed” was code for breaking a sweat and trading orgasms instead of falling asleep. i like this new style of going to bed better than the original term
It wasn’t always easy, but biting into pillows or each other’s skin helped some. of course jongkey never goes noticed they have mastered the art of ninja sex
Jonghyun leaned in to kiss him, morality be damned. made me smile
He laced their fingers together, resting them above Kibum’s head, and Jonghyun was convinced that there was nothing sexier than the sight of Kibum coming undone without the use of his hands, squirming and pressing up to rub off against Jonghyun’s body instead. unf everything about this is pure porn to me omg unffffffffF
the entire part with jonghyun visiting his mom was so sweet... also how she sent food with him just aww i wish i had parents like that
He still slipped on his couple shirt every Sunday. It soon also became their “cyber-date night”, where they would both buy food and eat it together, seated cross-legged on their beds in front of their computers, and it usually ended with the both of them naked or, on one memorable occasion, wearing nothing but said couple shirts. awww at their sunday dating and ooooheeeyyyyy at their cyber-fucking
before pulling her into a bone-crushing hug and chanting, “Thankyouthankyouthankyou.” :') his family is the sweetest i see where he got it from

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astridminjichoi July 26 2014, 17:21:55 UTC
laST PART I PROMISE
“Oh god, are you-you’re not kidding?” Kibum asked hopefully. kibum i got just as excited as you omg
i>“Now for the second part,” Jonghyun announced, leaning off to the side and reaching for his guitar, “as per tradition.” I'M SMILING REALLY BRIGHTLY RIGHT NOW OHMYGOD THEIR BIRTHDAY TRADITION IS THE CUTEST AND MOST MEANINGFUL BLEsdjfsdfklsdKJJDLFS and i would cry too kibum don't u worry
By the time finals came around, all he wanted to do was curl up in bed and cuddle with Kibum did i already talk about how my stomach dropped or
“I am, but not too much for this,” he replied, sneaking a hand beneath Kibum’s coat to rest on his ass. THAS THE SPIRIT
“More, come on,” Kibum groaned to his lips impatient!kibum is the best kibum omg
Jonghyun may or may not have held both cups hostage at some point, demanding payment in the form of kisses. this is the cutest thing i've read in a while
Still, the alleged “cold” gave them an excuse to cuddle in public c: how close they are in this fic touches my heart
“Admit it, I have the best ideas.” i grinned a little too widely at this
“there’s more to it, and I want to talk about it with you, I do, but this isn’t a conversation I want to have on top of a double-decker.” i got really nervous reading this, i just didn't want anyeone to say something wrong that they'd regret and i selfishly don't want anything to happe to their relationship bc theyre perfect
“Well I’m sorry Jonghyun but you’re kind of freaking me out here! ITS FREAKING ME OUT TOO
the way they are discussing their future but also thinking so much of whats best for the other... you can easily see how much they care for each other.
“I just… don’t want you to regret anything. And most of all I don’t want to be the cause of it.” i would be concerned about this too.. i mean love is love and it is the best thing that can happen to you in certain cases but it can hold you down. and jonghyun loves kibum enough to see that
“And you think I don’t feel the same way?” Kibum retorted, tone rising. and kibum does as well.
“Missed you too much,” was his answer; “it never really felt like home.” and i swear this fic has succesfully turned me into a puddle of feelings i didn't know i had
“Just three more weeks of this, Jjong,” Kibum reasoned, sobering up at once and smoothing out his coat, “and then I’m all yours again.” ok this is so fucking ironic because after this line i looked up at my sister (she had no idea i had been reading btw lol) and kinda muttered to herself/me 'wow how perfect wouldn't it be if kibum came home and then jonghyun proposed to him bc if they could survive one year apart they could spend forever together'
anD THEN
As Jonghyun walked away he tried to think of ways to make the following weeks more bearable. Except he had already thought of the best way, and he already had some money set aside for it, too. Rings didn’t pay for themselves, after all. LET ME FUCKING TELL YOU I GAPED AT MY SCREEN, SCREECHED/SCREAMED BECAUSE OH MY GOD ASDFGHJKLKJRSDFGHJKLKJHFDSASDFGHJKLØLKJHFDSASDFGHJKLØLKJHGFDSASDFGHJKLKJHGFDSASDFGHJK DID THIS JUST FUCKING HAPPEN??? NAD I WAS NOT LYING IN MY FIRST COMMENT I ACTUALLY THREW MY COMPUTER AWAY AND SQUIRMED AT THE FLOOR. THERE HAS BEEN A LONG WHILE SINCE I HAVE EXPERIENCED SUCH INTENSE FEELS LEET ME TELL YOU
and i am sad that this verse is over now (I WOULD KILL THOUGH FOR A DRABBLE ABOUT THE PROPOSAL, NOT EVEN LYING) but it really couldn't have has a better ending. their love for each other is rock solid and nothing can stop them <3
just thank you so much for sharing this, one of the most precious fics i have ever read *hugs* i know my comment are mostly me spazzing buy i can't convey how this makes me feel omg i wish english was my first language so i could explain to you how much this means to me
this made my day week. thank you<3.

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just2wings July 28 2014, 18:20:18 UTC
I DON'T KNOW HOW TO ANSWER THIS COMMENT. HOW!?!?!?!??! I JUST WANT TO SPAZZ TBH.
BUT LET ME TELL YOU I WAS REALLY FUCKING EXCITED TO FIND IT IN MY INBOX
YOU ARE AWESOME. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND FOR THIS FREAKIN AMAZING COMMENT <33333 IT MADE ME LAUGH AND SMILE UNTIL MY CHEEKS HURT SO THANK YOU
ahem. I hope your laptop is okay though!!!!!
(And yes I do think of this as one longfic lol)
It shouldn't make me happy that you felt unwell but I'm glad the emotions got through to you ;__;
They do miscommunicate sometimes, like in that earlier drabble where they have a bit of a fight, but they're both very honest people and I think that would translate into relationships as well???!??
So happy you think I got the feeling right ;____; thank you, feelings are hard to write sometimes so thank you. Especially for that first goodbye scene -- I'd pictured it so much in my mind that when came time to write it I wasn't basking in the feeling of it all that much, I wrote it a bit like on automatic mode. So thank you, again ;_____;
I'm sorry about your insomnia dear. I struggle with falling asleep too sometimes and it really ain't fun. I'm no expert and sleep's a bitch but try to do something relaxing before going to bed. Clear your mind and try not to think of things that have the potential to keep you up??? Idk. Insomnia sucks so bad I'm so sorry :( but I do know that you don't need somebody else to make it better, all you need is yourself <3
It was my first time writing webcam sex. It was surprisingly not as hard as I thought it would be even though I can't write dirty talk \o/
Minho is a really good friend :)
I really wanted Jonghyun to be kind of awkward the first time xD I'm so glad you agree lol
And of course there had to be sex toys. There. Had. To.
"once he figured out that long distance dirty talk basically meant describing what he wanted to do to Kibum. jonghyun such a genius" i don't care that I'm quoting the comment quote but omg you had me chortling here, I LOVE YOUR SARCASM
Thankfully Jonghyun was too drunk to work a keypad or else you know it would have been embarrassing xDDDD lmao
"Napping now, sex later? AGREED" here I go again but man I JUST LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM <333333333333333333333333333
I just imagine Taemin having the most random timing in this verse xD
NO DON'T SAY THAT YOUR COMMENTS ARE SUPER DUPER HIGH QUALITY IN MY HEART
"i like this new style of going to bed better than the original term" you're so funny i love you
And JongKey haven't exactly mastered the art of ninja sex; they really aren't as ninja as they think they are. Kibum's parents are just nice enough not to say anything or embarrass them OTL they're very good at ignoring lol
I'M SO HAPPY you liked the birthday tradition because idk when I was writing it I was like is this crossing the line into "too cheesy"????? IDk but I couldn't not put it at the same time so tHANK YOU
"“I am, but not too much for this,” he replied, sneaking a hand beneath Kibum’s coat to rest on his ass. THAS THE SPIRIT" I LOVE YOUUUUUU
"impatient!kibum is the best kibum omg" IT IS GLAD YOU AGREE
I always pictured Jonghyun as the most insecure one in their relationship in this verse, hence why he's so ready to move for Kibum despite his own preferences. His insecurities kind of drive the plot (if you can call it that, lmao) of this fic. Poor bb. Kibum just has to remind him that he loves him too.
I AM SO HAPPY THIS COULD GIVE YOU FEELINGS AND SORRY ABOUT THE COMPUTER AGAIN BUT I WILL NOT APOLOGIZE FOR THE SQUIRMING :DDDDDDDD YOUR COMMENTS WERE SO FUCKING AWESOME YOU'RE AWESOME THANK YOU SO MUCH
And I may write more, like other drabbles or timestamps or what not but I'm not promising anything! Just saying it's a possibility! Although I haven't thought about how the proposal would go...mmm.. so much to wonder about.
You conveyed yourself just right *hugs you so tight you can't breathe* seriously thank you so much for this comment and for reading and for being so nice ;_; your comment made me so happy <33333333

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