Rock My World (Chapter 12)
Pairing: JongKey
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Rock musical!AU, Romance & Drama
Beta-ed by: desiderada
Disclaimer: I wish.
Summary: When Onew leaves the Korean production of RoA, Jonghyun is promoted to lead singer in his place and a new actor is also hired. Sparks fly, drama ensues - Rock & Roll.
( And then he wished he hadn’t. )
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Rock musical!AU, Romance & Drama
Beta-ed by: desiderada
Disclaimer: I wish.
Summary: When Onew leaves the Korean production of RoA, Jonghyun is promoted to lead singer in his place and a new actor is also hired. Sparks fly, drama ensues - Rock & Roll.
( And then he wished he hadn’t. )
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/is lying.
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so. I'll get started now. no time to waste.
Jonghyun was lonely. no, that's cool. just break my heart with the very first line.
Jonghyun used to stare out of his bedroom window and wonder if there was really someone out there meant for him. Now he would stare out of his bedroom window and think of Kibum. oh dear lord this kills my heart :'c
It was harder to keep track of days when one didn’t have a smiling face to look forward to, a kiss, a touch, a simple caress. like I said above. jfdasljfdlajfdal :'c
“You honestly don’t believe these rumours, do you?” the bright-haired boy asked. TAEMIN, LET ME HUG YOU OMFG. I love this so much. because Jonghyun was about to just blindly buy into whatever they all said, but Taemin snapped him out of it. I love this. all of the much.
When Jonghyun pressed to know who exactly had been saying that, the director could only name two: Jino and Jessica. >:S of course it was them. of course.
He needed to see Key again, not phone him or text him, which ( ... )
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Their tears dripped down their cheeks, seeping into their kiss and Jonghyun had never felt quite like he did in that moment, with Kibum - the real Kibum, the one that was honest and hurt and insecure and still so incredibly beautiful - in his arms and with his heart in his throat. this is beautiful. I can't even express. it's simple at the same time that it's so relevant to everything that'd happened.. it's really just.. gorgeous.
“I don’t care,” he spoke again as Kibum kissed him desperately. “I love you.” legit crying now. what did I just say about "beautiful"?
.. also, Jonghyun is shameless and I love it. just saying.
at least until the tune of Big Bang’s “Love Song” could be heard from the kitchen, where Kibum’s roommate had surely turned up the volume as revenge for the past half hour this. I love this. XDXD
“Move in with me,” GOOD IDEA. I LIKE THIS IDEA.
“ ( ... )
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I need to go to school, but... God, is it really the last chapter?? THIS IS NOT THE REALITY I WANTED!!!!! T________________________T
Brb to comment. Oh gosh, I'm trying so hard not to sob and all I read was the line 'And then he wished he hadn't.
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*needs to fix her make up because of you*
I love you. Just, gosh, let me comment when I get home, 'k?
Man, I just can't. OMG.
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And I love you too ^^
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/Hito is so lame
And I read this chapter for, like, 15 times already... man, I feel so bad not commenting on it properly earlier.
But, better late than never, right?
SO!
"Jonghyun used to stare out of his bedroom window and wonder if there was really someone out there meant for him. Now he would stare out of his bedroom window and think of Kibum."
This got me tearing up like idek.
And this:
"It was harder to keep track of days when one didn’t have a smiling face to look forward to, a kiss, a touch, a simple caress"
Really, I could just feel it with him, as if I were him. Gosh, when you realize you've been living in delusion for such a long time it's so hard to trust the people again.
"Jonghyun definitely hadn’t been expecting to hear that and it only served to anger him because it showed just how little he knew Key, in the end."God, this hurt me so much too. Especially when I read it for the first time, not knowing yet whether Key was the perfect actor or if he had some other reasons for lying ( ... )
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Last Chapter?! Oh nos!
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This fic is really beautiful, like, no joke. It made me laugh, cry, and gave me the warm fuzzies. It was everything that it could be.
I LOVE <3333 how everything fit together at the end. All the suspicious/sketchy things that Kibum did, every little lie he told, made sense. My heart was beating so fast at the scene where they realize everything. There was this amazing moment of "oh shit! so that's what really happened!" I thought it was executed really well, and it's nice to see that you probably planned the plot BEFORE you started writing, unlike what most people do!
I'm really happy with how you wrapped things up. Some people and their fics really abruptly, leaving it at an awkward spot. You know, that moment where you're like "sooooooooo...? and then what??" even w/out the epilogue, there wasn't any of that.
It was sweet, fluffy, and wonderful! ^^
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And yes, I did plan everything before I started writing. Sketching the outline was indeed quite long but really worth it in the end because it made writing easier ^^ However sometimes it can be hard to know how the story will develop while actually typing it lol I hope I'm making sense xD
Open endings can sometimes be really good because they let people imagine and wonder, but for this fic I didn't want that. I'm glad that, you too, thought that the ending was fitting ^^
Thank you <3
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And you're probably right about Roo, too xD
You get plenty of cookies for guessing ^^
Thank you very much for reading and commenting! The wait won't be too long!
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Thank you so much for reading! (and wanting to re-read, wow ^^)
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