Broken Bonds and Healing Balms -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Broken Bonds and Healing Balms
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Angst/Light romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Malexmale sexual interaction, language, violence, mentions of rape
Pairings: Tora/Aki, Kenzo/Aki
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “Isn’t that what you want?” came the

Comments

[invisiblehabits]

It makes sense, it does! And even if it didn't it would be totally acceptable with such good excuses for creating confusion! <3

[invisiblehabits]

Yes indeed, things don't always go according to plan. I'm glad you approve love! <333

[invisiblehabits]

Fffff, internet just ate my reply!

*hugs you* I'll try to write some fluff, I promise. It's just that my mind has taken up permanent residence on Angst Lane, with a nice little getaway cabin in Sadness Swamp. Yesterday I almost cried on the train when listening to some sad song I cannot remember at the time being. My mind is horrible half the time I tell you!!

I'm glad you like the story though. It is sad and painful in all the wrong ways. Perhaps the saddest part of all is that they, Aki and Tora, so clearly did love each other before they tried to add pain to their relationship. But it tore them apart, horribly so, and I can only hope they will not miss what they once had all too much, that what they have now is somehow enough...

You do make sense though and I am so happy you comment!! I promise I'll try to write something fluffy soon (I even have an idea in my head!) <3

[invisiblehabits]

LOL! I do get you, not so sure I get myself half the time. :P

But yes, I'll try to write it! Perhaps I should listen to the song I first listened to when the idea came to me...hm....

[invisiblehabits]

I'm so so so so glad you like it! When I first began writing I had no idea where it was going, just knew I wanted to write something for you and...well for once Kenzo got to play the hero

[siseja]

But alcohol and boredom had conspired against him and one morning he woke up next to Tora, thoroughly satisfied and not really minding the arm tightening protectively around him when he tried to move

*giggles delightfully over adorable image and memory of other adorable scene like that in Aroma*

...
*goes back to clinging to Aki with kicked-puppy eyes*

[siseja]

;__;

[siseja]

...might comment something a bit more intelligent when rational in the future

for now though

AKIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ;____; *clings to*

[invisiblehabits]

Yes, I am mean to poor little Aki... He got what he asked for and then a lot. *sigh* But at the same time I feel bad for Tora too, because he never wanted to hurt Aki in the first place but was little short of forced to. That's when the trust went out the window and...well...yeah, everything went to hell.

[velvet_liquor]

I had opened this fic in my browser when you posted it but somehow forgot to finish read it. I clearly suck xD

Well, I have to admit that, once again, you wrote something I love. You almost made me cry at one point. And, as you will see, it's late xD so this is certainly gonna be an uninteresting comment, but hell, I have to make one xDD
It's saddening to see a relationship that worked fall down like that, but in a way, that's not really surprising. That's a dangerous thing, that kind of relationship, so if one isn't made for that, they might lose control like Tora did. But I'm glad Kenzo was there for Aki ♥ and it's good to see Aki and Tora could still see each other in peace =]

Now, I'm off to bed~
*kisses* ♥ =D

[invisiblehabits]

Aaaaaw, you don't suck hun! Nu-uh, never! *huggles tightly*

I'm glad you like it and that you see the destruction of it. Tora and Aki had a rather beautiful relationship at the beginning, but the pain that was supposed to bring pleasure failed to do so. It became nothing but painful because Aki was too selfish and Tora didn't understand. They missed the most important part of an s/m relationship; trust!

The end brought about some kind of hope, or at least that was the aim. But they still have a long way to go, all of them. I agree though, it's good to see Aki and Tora seem to be moving on and can meet without feeling uncomfortable at the end.

I hope you slept well darling! And thank you for commenting!! <3333