Comments | i_am_davnee: Fic: Private Screening

i_am_davnee

Fic: Private Screening

Jul 12, 2009 23:40

“Be serious,” came the laughing reply. “Do this for me and I might even shave it.”

“I’m not that dumb or lucky, Bill.”

Lee chuckled as he reached forward and grabbed his drink. None of them were that lucky. He didn’t know what the hell his father was thinking when he’d brought back that look. He was sure that any day now the Old Man would ( Read more... )

adama/roslin, fanfic, bsg

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snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:01:27 UTC

Have I told you lately that I love this?

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:05:43 UTC

LOL! It might have come up recently. Kinda like Lee! ;P

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:12:48 UTC

Lee's growing in many, many ways.

Seriously though, I love how, from the very beginning, you used such guy language. It creates such a great atmosphere. Especially with the reflections and the childhood memories. A fic about Lee (kinda) that completely engages me. And I thought it couldn't be done!

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:16:24 UTC

Neither did I. Shocked me at the end when I'd realized I'd just written a fic about Lee. Yikes! Are cats and dogs suddenly mating or something?! ;P

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katamarann July 13 2009, 04:21:33 UTC

Saaaweet. Assesofkobol.

ILU. And you made me both like Lee and kinda want to frak him. WTF is wrong with me?

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:35:21 UTC

Same thing that's wrong with me. I'm experiencing a little Lee love myself. It's all kinds of wrong, especially since it's Fat!Lee I'm pondering frakking.

*requests an intervention ... stat!* Until then I'll just stare at this towel ...

katamarann July 13 2009, 04:53:02 UTC

Well, like you said in the fic, he was just beginning to fluff up, so it wasn't too bad.

Hell, who am I kidding. Fat!Lee was still kind of cute, in a chubby, Star Wars geek kind of way. And if I'll frak Bill and his big ole belly, I'll give Lee some love.

/might be needing lovin' from the boy next to me sometime soon. Before I requalify for my virginity.

tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:29:22 UTC

You fulfilled all the prompts and it wasn't PURE CRACK?! How the frak did you manage to do that? I love that this sex tape exists, and I love the reason for its existence. It makes total sense.

I also love the description of Lee and Zak finding their dad's porn stash when they were kids and the fact that he still does it. Just proves that he never grew up.

Laura and Adama are surprisingly sweet considering what's on the tape, and I do like that even Lee has to acknowledge the sentiment behind the actions.

I only wish Adama had moved past the lens once with an impressive boner when Lee was maligning his studliness, but that's just me.

Fabulous stuff. Amazingly fun and ultimately touching.

somadanne July 13 2009, 04:40:15 UTC

I only wish Adama had moved past the lens once with an impressive boner when Lee was maligning his studliness, but that's just me.

You and me, both. :P

Edited because I can't code when I've had a glass of wine, dammit.

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:46:10 UTC

Come on, that boner is 69+ years old now. *snorts* Down to one show stopping performance per night sadly. (But it is a show stopper!)

somadanne July 13 2009, 04:48:22 UTC

Oh sweet Lords of Kobol, who gives a damn about the frakking "timeline"? :P

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icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:32:41 UTC

...

hold on... i need a moment by myself.

tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:37:31 UTC

It's amazing she was able to type that with only one hand.

somadanne July 13 2009, 04:41:00 UTC

OMGS, I'm truly LMAO here. LOLOLOLOL!!!

icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:45:05 UTC

years of practice, my friend.

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somadanne July 13 2009, 04:37:54 UTC

This truly made me laugh out loud--love it!

It was nice to see that the Old Man wasn’t wasting his time with the soft core shit these days.

And, um, I approve, too. *keeps reading*

Clearly his father had been getting dirtier with age. Lee approved.

Damn. I want to see more of happy, healthy Laura, too.

And they were looking right at his father, shining for him. But somehow that didn’t even matter to him. He just wanted to see more of this Laura. Happy. Healthy. And clearly right where she wanted to be, and with the person she wanted to be with. Not such an easy place to find.

This made me laugh, too. Love it:

Oh gods, his father was naked. Lee prayed that the Old Man had kept that camera pointed straight ahead the whole time, because the first flash of his dad’s junk and he was done. Not even Laura Roslin was hot enough to tolerate that shit.

This is perfect and so very hot:

“So close,” she moaned, lids heavy over eyes now completely unfocused with passion. “I always come thinking of you.” Aw, you made me ( ... )

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:56:09 UTC

Thank you! And I squicked myself in places too, but I figured in for a penny in for a pound (but not in for Bill's junk!). ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed.