Fic: Private Screening

Jul 12, 2009 23:40



“Be serious,” came the laughing reply.  “Do this for me and I might even shave it.”

“I’m not that dumb or lucky, Bill.”

Lee chuckled as he reached forward and grabbed his drink.  None of them were that lucky.  He didn’t know what the hell his father was thinking when he’d brought back that look.  He was sure that any day now the Old Man would ( Read more... )

adama/roslin, fanfic, bsg

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tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:29:22 UTC
You fulfilled all the prompts and it wasn't PURE CRACK?! How the frak did you manage to do that? I love that this sex tape exists, and I love the reason for its existence. It makes total sense.

I also love the description of Lee and Zak finding their dad's porn stash when they were kids and the fact that he still does it. Just proves that he never grew up.

Laura and Adama are surprisingly sweet considering what's on the tape, and I do like that even Lee has to acknowledge the sentiment behind the actions.

I only wish Adama had moved past the lens once with an impressive boner when Lee was maligning his studliness, but that's just me.

Fabulous stuff. Amazingly fun and ultimately touching.

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somadanne July 13 2009, 04:40:15 UTC
I only wish Adama had moved past the lens once with an impressive boner when Lee was maligning his studliness, but that's just me.

You and me, both. :P

Edited because I can't code when I've had a glass of wine, dammit.

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i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:46:10 UTC
Come on, that boner is 69+ years old now. *snorts* Down to one show stopping performance per night sadly. (But it is a show stopper!)

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somadanne July 13 2009, 04:48:22 UTC
Oh sweet Lords of Kobol, who gives a damn about the frakking "timeline"? :P

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icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:50:12 UTC
Maybe Laura's Sweet Tunnel of Love is actually a Fountain of Youth.

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tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:52:46 UTC
Brilliant point. You are forgiven for your Bill boner trash talking.

Due to Laura's "Fountain of Youth," Bill's boner is now 17 years old.

Thank you very much.

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icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:54:07 UTC
They'd better switch to oral for awhile so she doesn't get arrested.

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somadanne July 13 2009, 04:56:07 UTC
Ooh, I hadn't even thought of that. LOLOL!

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snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:54:18 UTC
How old is his tongue?

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tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:54:58 UTC
Twelve

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somadanne July 13 2009, 04:55:18 UTC
I think I love you for that. But you already knew that. :P

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i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:42:05 UTC
Aww, thanks for the ossum feedback. Glad the little bit of emotion balancing the crack didn't come off (ahem) totally insane. And I think the parts about Lee and Zak were my favorite for some reason. Made me actually (gasp) like Lee.

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tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:44:05 UTC
You might want to think about that "buttered popcorn" reference in your link, btw. I almost puked.

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snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:45:38 UTC
I like popcorn. It is deliciousness. :P

And no. I do not get the reference.

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i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:51:46 UTC
Have I made a sex reference I was completely unaware of? Gods that would be just my style. LOL!

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katamarann July 13 2009, 05:02:59 UTC
*thinks about how it could be construed as pervy*

*may have figured it out. maybe not.*

Either way...you perv!

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