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i_am_davnee

Fic: Private Screening

Jul 12, 2009 23:40

“Be serious,” came the laughing reply. “Do this for me and I might even shave it.”

“I’m not that dumb or lucky, Bill.”

Lee chuckled as he reached forward and grabbed his drink. None of them were that lucky. He didn’t know what the hell his father was thinking when he’d brought back that look. He was sure that any day now the Old Man would ( Read more... )

adama/roslin, fanfic, bsg

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snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:01:27 UTC

Have I told you lately that I love this?

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:05:43 UTC

LOL! It might have come up recently. Kinda like Lee! ;P

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:12:48 UTC

Lee's growing in many, many ways.

Seriously though, I love how, from the very beginning, you used such guy language. It creates such a great atmosphere. Especially with the reflections and the childhood memories. A fic about Lee (kinda) that completely engages me. And I thought it couldn't be done!

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:16:24 UTC

Neither did I. Shocked me at the end when I'd realized I'd just written a fic about Lee. Yikes! Are cats and dogs suddenly mating or something?! ;P

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:22:53 UTC

well, to be fair, Lee's kind of a dick in the fic. I never said I liked the prick.

And I love how Bill is so present in the story. And yet not on screen for one frame.

tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:31:13 UTC

And I love how Bill is so present in the story. And yet not on screen for one frame.

I think icedteainthebag appreciates that even more than you do ;P

i_am_davnee July 13 2009, 04:32:58 UTC

You say that just after wishing for impressive Bill studliness yourself. Methinks you are trying to have it both ways! ;P

tjonesy July 13 2009, 04:34:28 UTC

No, just one way for me. icedteainthebag is not a fan of Bill's boner. His tongue is another matter entirely.

Just sayin' ...

icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:47:44 UTC

LOL, ooooooooooh you.

He is a cunning linguist!!

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 05:00:58 UTC

He is. Quite articulate and nimble is he...

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:35:46 UTC

Bill's studliness is never in question here. Btw, have I mentioned that the story is hot. B/c the hotness! But I just love the most how you take a pure crack idea and let it evolve into something like this. From the very first time you sent this to me, I bought it. THAT, my dear, is wonderfully impressive.

icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:33:25 UTC

I do. Mhm. I do. *incoherent*

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:36:18 UTC

(((Bill)))

We should all write stories about his wonderPenis

somadanne July 13 2009, 04:43:58 UTC

About his wonder!penis and his wonder!tongue. It doensn't get much better, does it? Does it?? :P

icedteainthebag July 13 2009, 04:46:42 UTC

Does it?!?!?!

snoopy0917 July 13 2009, 04:52:13 UTC

It really, really doesn't. I'm sure Bill could make use of both of these wondrous abilities in very, very ...interesting ways.

We must investigate this...

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