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Prompt #7: Days

Feb 09, 2010 22:22

Title: Mimicry
Fandom: SHINee
Characters: Kim Kibum, Kim Jonghyun
Prompt: Days
Word Count: 683
Rating: R
Summary: Curiosity kills
Author's Notes: Admittedly, this one sits a little .. I'm not sure how I feel about this. I don't think it's bad, or anything like that, but it's ... Darker than the rest. I guess that's all I really have to say.

( Too smart for his own good, he’s always been impulsive, rash. He’ll regret what he does if he acts now. )

shining shinee, jongkey, fanfiction

Comments 43

prickilla February 10 2010, 08:20:57 UTC

Oh yes your dark fics are just the best . I hate reading them generally because people tend to overdo it so I usuaally stick to what the fandom does best : fluff
but this was just amazing no matter how creepy/gruesome that was.
From the author note to the first thought from jonghyun I had expected something like this but when I actually read it it was so much more than what I expected x)
like, I thought jonghyun would kill key then disect but he didn't =/ and yeah totally surprised me in a good way I guess :)
However, not to be cannabilistic sounding or whatever but from logic alone, human flesh is probably automaically the best tasting? (ewwww) flesh out there as gross and retarded as it sounds because we eat like evrything else that roams the earth so if a cow tastes so nice from only eating grass what the fuck would we taste like @_@ ew, sorry just remembered about scary newspaper article on this; figures only Asian newspapers would speculate such things >.> woah totally off track but anyway back to the point, I think jonghyun ( ... )

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 22:11:55 UTC

I haven't read much fanfiction in the SHINee fandom. I dunno why, I just haven't gotten around to it. So I'm not sure how this sort of thing is handled much. It doesn't seem like the sort of genre that would be written by a lot of people, though. I mean, people really enjoy reading about their idols getting hurt like this? lmfao idk I'm rambling, clearly. ><;;

No, bb, don't worry about sounding ~*~cannibalistic~*~. I've thought, pretty much ever since I started watching the Hannibal movies, that human flesh probably does taste good. Of course, it's not something that we can really test out. Society deems it wrong and blahblahblah. But really, not to sound like a freak, but if I had the chance to legally try human flesh? Hell yeah I would. I'm curious as all get out, and you're probably right on all accounts, we probably taste amazing. Asian newspapers have the best speculations ^^ erm well Japanese ones, those are the only ones I can understand lmfaoI actually really enjoyed making Jonghyun the antagonist for once. He seems like he ( ... )

prickilla February 11 2010, 09:32:21 UTC

=/ i kinda get grossed by those sorta movies but if i got the chance on like tasting it i would too ~
lol, cant read japanese ones. (YET!!!) chinese newspapers (Y)
jonghyun is just in a different category of his own when he's the antagonist because of all the possible crazy!personalities he could take on, while with key its a lot more limited tbh.

hyungwhore February 12 2010, 00:03:53 UTC

I mean, I do too. But I'm usually all right with getting the disconnect between reality and cinema, soooo I'm usually okay. Needles and limbs going the wrong direction are the two things I absolutely CANNOT handle though. Just. What. No. ><
lol Chinese seems sooooooooo complicated. T.T

Key works really, really well as a completely psychotic sadist. I've never really tried any different sort of antagonist with him, but I definitely agree with you. I'm not sure there's much at all to do with him in this sort of setting.

mayzeeacala February 10 2010, 09:18:15 UTC

I think I will be a vegetarian from now on I can't belive jjong can do this haha xD key was so messed up haha jjong is very curious indeed xD

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 22:58:41 UTC

OT extremely but your icon is so cute^^

lol Thank you for reading this and commenting on it. I appreciate it soooo much~!!

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mayzeeacala February 11 2010, 10:17:53 UTC

Im sorry but I dont know whats the meaning of OT :(
thanks anyway! :D I used this one for my project. keke :D

hyungwhore February 11 2010, 23:58:06 UTC

No need to be sorry, bb. All these internet terms confuse me sometimes, too. ^^ OT means "off topic." ^^;;

Thread 5

aishi07 February 10 2010, 10:33:07 UTC

.....OHMYGOD.

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it was well-written.

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descriptive.

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.i liked it.

x_x

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 23:00:00 UTC

Sounds like you were surprised or something. lmfao This fic is getting so many o.O reactions. ><;; keke I guess that's a good thing!!

Anyway!! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this! That you read it and took the time to comment on it!! It feels so amazing to get comments like this.

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hp_groupie February 10 2010, 14:58:26 UTC

Well dammit. I just read the first line. D:

brb...finishing.

hp_groupie February 10 2010, 15:04:04 UTC

WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!? D:

It's well written but damn. :O

I actually covered my eyes while reading this. DDDDD:

....you need to write horror. omg.

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 23:02:06 UTC

omo is it bad that your opening line of the second comment just made me giggle a little bit? I mean, wow now I just sound like a crazy person. I'm not, I swear. (Don't judge me by my fics.. ^^;;)

Seriously, though. I'm actually really, really glad that it got this sort of a reaction from you. It makes me feel like I did something right. ^^

bb horror is my jam, for serious. ^^

hp_groupie February 10 2010, 23:23:14 UTC

I'm not judging you by your fics...but omg. D:

WHY KEY!? And my mind's eye is extremely vivid so this is just...UGH.

I had to pause for a minute.

I applaud your writing style and attention to detail. BUT OMG. YOUR WRITING STYLE AND ATTENTION TO DETAIL. D: *covers eyes again*

...well done though!

o____o

Thread 9

yuya_lovah February 10 2010, 20:45:17 UTC

*Speechless* to be honest, my "ILoveCreepyStory" part is pretty happy to have read this xD even if the eye's part made me shiver a little, I was in pain just think about it *runs* I was shocked when I saw "Hostel" and the Japanese girl had an eye less D: (and luckily for me, I don't eat cow's tongue or I won't be able to eat it normally u_u'').
Since I suck to leave comment when I really like a fic, I'll end my useless comment now XD just to let you know, I enjoyed read this and the fact Kibum was alive when Jonghyun was "torturing" him, made Jjong's character real *nods* ( I read too many things about killers, psychos and cannibals, the most part of them didn't kill their victims since their fun would have been ruined.)

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 23:04:36 UTC

This might be surprising, but I've never seen Hostel. And I've only seen like, the first two Saw movies. I'm so not a fan of movies like that I guess. Well, I am, and I'm not. But then I write something like this. wtf is this, self. lmfao ^^;;

I didn't do that on the basis of any research, and I probably shouldn't admit that, I think, as it makes me feel like a novice for not doing my homework. I just went along with what I thought was the most realistic thing, and apparently I was right. rofl It's good to know!!

Annndddd now I have to get to the trite part that I'm having absolutely no luck with making sound original, buuuuuut, thank you so much for taking the time to comment and read and all that jazz. I super appreciate it and you're awesome for doing it~

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