Prompt #7: Days

Feb 09, 2010 22:22

Title: Mimicry
Fandom: SHINee
Characters: Kim Kibum, Kim Jonghyun
Prompt: Days
Word Count: 683
Rating: R
Summary: Curiosity kills
Author's Notes: Admittedly, this one sits a little .. I'm not sure how I feel about this. I don't think it's bad, or anything like that, but it's ... Darker than the rest. I guess that's all I really have to say.

Too smart for his own good, he’s always been impulsive, rash. He’ll regret what he does if he acts now. )

shining shinee, jongkey, fanfiction

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hp_groupie February 10 2010, 14:58:26 UTC
Well dammit. I just read the first line. D:

brb...finishing.

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hp_groupie February 10 2010, 15:04:04 UTC
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!? D:

It's well written but damn. :O

I actually covered my eyes while reading this. DDDDD:

....you need to write horror. omg.

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hyungwhore February 10 2010, 23:02:06 UTC
omo is it bad that your opening line of the second comment just made me giggle a little bit? I mean, wow now I just sound like a crazy person. I'm not, I swear. (Don't judge me by my fics.. ^^;;)

Seriously, though. I'm actually really, really glad that it got this sort of a reaction from you. It makes me feel like I did something right. ^^

bb horror is my jam, for serious. ^^

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hp_groupie February 10 2010, 23:23:14 UTC
I'm not judging you by your fics...but omg. D:

WHY KEY!? And my mind's eye is extremely vivid so this is just...UGH.

I had to pause for a minute.

I applaud your writing style and attention to detail. BUT OMG. YOUR WRITING STYLE AND ATTENTION TO DETAIL. D: *covers eyes again*

...well done though!

o____o

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hyungwhore February 11 2010, 01:09:31 UTC
Key totally got the short end of things in this simply because the brand of crazy that Jonghyun is in it isn't the sort of insane that I can easily picture Key being. And, well, because in my other fics Jonghyun is the one that gets hurt at the end.

I'm pretty sure I'm stoked about your comment. lmfao It's hard to be sure because you seem deeply disturbed by this!! I mean, sure, that's an amazing response, but I wanna make sure you're okay bb!!

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hp_groupie February 11 2010, 01:34:08 UTC
Oh no, don't worry, I'm fine! LOL

I just really want you to experience how I felt while reading this.

I'll continue looking out for your pieces. ^__^

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hyungwhore February 11 2010, 01:37:32 UTC
I'm relieved bb!! lmfao I was like, jfc I hope I didn't like kill her or something. ><;; (I've been told I worry too much.)

I appreciate that!! Really. I like knowing exactly what my pieces make people think!!

omo that makes me want to write!! ^^

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hp_groupie February 11 2010, 01:38:58 UTC
As long as I know it's not REAL and I don't SEE it...I'm good. lol

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hyungwhore February 11 2010, 01:58:47 UTC
Very, very good point. omg I don't even want to think about stuff like this actually happening. lol

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