Comments | hp100: Sacred/Theft/The Abyss/Clinging to Sanity

wulfkub in hp100

Sacred/Theft/The Abyss/Clinging to Sanity

Jun 24, 2006 21:48

Title: Sacred
House: Gryffindor
Rating: PG
Characters: Hermione
Challenge: Map of the World
Word Count: 100
A/N: I have no idea when this one takes place, really. At any time, I imagine, Hermione could have slipped off down to the lake by herself ( Read more... )

sirius, hermione author: wulfkub, bellatrix, challenge: map of the world, lucius

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author_by_night June 25 2006, 02:30:59 UTC

I loved the Sirius one. It was amazingly in character.

However, Draco and Lucius...

First, with Lucius, Azkaban was broken into before he was caught. The Dementors were long gone. And Lucius is not ashamed of being a Death Eater - quite the reverse, actually.

With Draco... as of book seven, he's not going to be at Hogwarts, nor Hermione. Before book seven, do you really think he'd have let Hermione cry alone? I think he would've tortured her into even more tears with jibes and such.

wulfkub June 25 2006, 02:34:21 UTC

Thanks!

And, crap, I totally forgot about that...grrr.

As for Draco, hell, maybe he was having a sympathetic moment.

author_by_night June 25 2006, 02:43:18 UTC

As for Draco, hell, maybe he was having a sympathetic moment.

No offense, but I really don't see Draco as capable of having one of those. His idea of sympathy is thinking "Mudbloods deserved to die like OMG."

wulfkub June 25 2006, 02:45:24 UTC

None taken.

I believe Draco is not fully corrupted yet. He might not have even realized it was Hermione.

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hopelight June 25 2006, 02:56:07 UTC

I loved the second and fourth one...fantastic!

wulfkub June 25 2006, 02:57:21 UTC

Thanks!

primreceded June 25 2006, 03:07:05 UTC

always enjoy reading what you come up with for the challenges. loved the Sirius one. nice job for all, tho.

wulfkub June 25 2006, 03:11:51 UTC

Thanks!

evelynlela June 25 2006, 04:28:21 UTC

Bella is so, I love the way you write her. Other people write her like that but they do it wrong like all she is is cruel not intelligent evil. Sort of like she is Crabbe or Goyle, it annoys me. But you write her like I see her, she choose that way and she stuck with it.
Just like Sirius did not choose that way, and suffered for it.
Black family fic... Thanks.

wulfkub June 25 2006, 16:31:42 UTC

I do love the idea that she is a strong intelligent evil woman...kinda harkens back to the fables (Sleeping Beauty, Beauty and the Beast, The Little Mermaid, etc) where the evil in the plot always comes from the woman.

She is visciously intelligent.

Thanks.

ajat June 25 2006, 07:38:08 UTC

Very very good ! Very intense. And Bellatrix scared me ... she always does.

ajat June 25 2006, 07:50:45 UTC

'm reccing this to _toujours__pur_ ... Please let me know if that's OK or not ... If it's'n't, I'll take the rec down ...

wulfkub June 25 2006, 16:32:19 UTC

Oh, no, that's totally cool. Thanks for the rec...

ajat June 27 2006, 11:50:47 UTC

Thank you !

:)

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