Posting over here because it's too hard to read with the threading over there.
Sup, guys! Updates to come soon, I just need some sleep so it won't come out looking like my idea of editing involved banging my head against a keyboard.
Wit Of The Staircase 66/?
anonymous
September 5 2010, 03:19:53 UTC
*
Matthew took up his phone, answering immediately. He didn't let it ring anymore, as only three people ever called him, and all of them were calls he didn't want to screen.
"Matthieu?"
"Yes?"
"We're going to be taking lunch in one of the classrooms this time. Mr. Edelstein's to be exact."
"Ok, I'll meet you there," he said.
Matthew took a look around before diverting from the crowd of lemmings going towards the cafeteria. He hoped Francis had cooked something, consider he hadn't brought anything and he didn't want to have to go without any food, or cut to get some.
When he came in, Mr. Edelstein was nowhere to be seen, and the group was seated in the folding chairs near the middle of the room. A big black baby grand piano was in the side of the room, because Mr. Edelstein would rather bring his own rather than have a poorly tuned old thing the school had.
"Come on, man. Hand it over," Gilbert pleaded. "She gave them to everyone but me. Not fair.Francis pulled the cupcake away and took another bite. "I'm sorry, mon ami
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 68/?
anonymous
September 5 2010, 03:33:14 UTC
Matthew was beginning to think that Francis had it out for his GPA. He'd talked to Francis in the morning on his cell and almost been late in the progress. Because of this, he hadn't put his cell in his locker, but left it where he last put it.
Which was where it was now. Vibrating. In his pants. In the middle of class.
He fumbled for it, cheeks flaming as he hoped his practical invisibility to his classmates would extend to the cellphone as well. He couldn't answer right here, but the means seemed to only get his attention. There, right there was a text: I'm in the mens restroom, sneaking a cigarette dreaming of a tryst right in the third stall.
The thought was hot, and yet repulsive. It smelled horrible. It was one thing to do the deed in Francis' or his squeaky clean bathroom, but he couldn't even bring himself to jerk off in there when he was desperate.
Matthieu, I've got this image in my mind: I'm licking up your throat. You've pushed me against the stall. I can't get you out of your clothes fast enough. You're so hard
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 69/?
anonymous
September 5 2010, 03:38:00 UTC
The smell of smoke smelled heavenly compared to the stench of the boy's bathroom. Urine, and what else he didn't even want to think about.
"If we get caught, we're so dead," Matthew said.
"We won't get caught," Francis said. He exhaled a cloud of smoke, and put out his cigarette, careful to douse the flame before throwing it away. Nothing like a fire to kill the mood.
They both walked to stall three, and Matthew processed the grafitti scratched and sharpied on. Katya's got nice tits! and for a good time, call Lizzie which he was pretty sure was Gilbert's handwriting. There was a heart with ACF+LV in a heart
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 70/?
anonymous
September 5 2010, 03:41:15 UTC
"Now cher, say my name...."
"Francis-"
He was on the verge of coming. So close he could barely take it.
"F-Francis, please, I'm going to get jizz all over."
"Now we can't have that, now can we?" Francis took one more picture, then another. One zoomed out to see the desperate sex-that-isn't-really-sex-or-maybe-it-is face, and then one on his cock.
"Francis, I'm serious, let me move, I don't want to get everything dirty."
"Tsk tsk. Just have patience. I'll fix it."
He stroked Matthew's leg, and then gripped the base hard. Matthieu gasped. The pressure was intense, but for that second, he felt pushed back, delayed, if you will.
"Do you think you can last long enough to fuck me?" Francis asked.
"Probably not, there'd have to be preparation and stuff," Matthew said apologetically.
"No, you misunderstand. My mouth.""Fuck your mouth...um, how does that work
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 71/?
anonymous
September 5 2010, 03:53:10 UTC
As much as Matthew wanted to thrust hard, his coherent thought slowly unraveling as he neared climax, he refused to. If anything, he went more slowly, which by the way Francis was tapping at his leg, was not what Francis wanted at all.
Francis hummed a line from La Vie En Rose, and the vibrations were wonderful. He came almost immediately, and Francis wiped at his mouth as Matthew leaned back on the stall door.
Now when he heard the song, this moment would be entwined with that first day at Francis' apartment, slightly hungover and new and hopeful. He smiled down at Francis. "I hope I didn't disappoint you."
"You're never disappointing, Matthieu," Francis said. "Well, except your clothes, but with someone like Arthur as a guide, I suppose you aren't to be blamed
( ... )
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 71/?
anonymous
September 5 2010, 17:29:35 UTC
Speaking of "fucking awesome" *points upward* THAT was fucking awesome.
I'm incredibly happy that Francis is starting to get the hint that maybe he doesn't want this month to be done so quickly. ... and not gonna lie, when he told Mattie to fuck his mouth I got really hot and bothered... but mostly I like it for plot! I swear! (is totally lying but really trying to be sophisticated)
AWww screw it, I LOVE IT for ALL of it. Good work, there.
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 71/?
anonymous
September 7 2010, 03:51:21 UTC
You're back~! \O/
Very much loving how as much as they're trying not to fall (harder) for each other - Matthew because he knows Francis is a playboy and Francis because he enjoys being a playboy - it's happening anyway. *lols with popcorn*
Also yes, the image of Francis murmuring things in ears is hot, omnomnom...
And to any anons who can't open the end of the last thread because of stretch - try opening it in Real Player. I couldn't get it open in my Firefox or Chrome, but RP worked. o_O
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 71/?
anonymous
September 7 2010, 06:07:01 UTC
Anon from tea party here again <3
About the last comment I gave you, baw ;A; I understand you've been busy, so don't worry <3 and hdkhjjsd ok ;w; I'll add you now after I comment here. I still think I'll be a creeper, but you're so awesome -hugs back- and all of my comments are made with love to you, even when they look so dumb XD <3
(And being honest, I want this fic to last forever so the moment I'm dead and my daughter starts crying 'cause there was an update, I'll revive, read it and die again but now from happiness. Keep going on, anon ;3; you are really making an awesome thing and 60k are just a big point in the roaaad).
Now, about this update...
I think the common phrases like "have my babies", "omg I give you my life and love" and others, are nothing compared to what I feel now. Francis realizing he wants more than one month is so <3333 and God, of course everything was beyond fucking awesome. The kiss they shared made my baw and I really feel like I need to read Matt with a catholic schoolgirl uniform and Francis with a
( ... )
/hugs! Awww, your comments are so sweet! I want to finish this story, and hope to update it again soon, but let me put it this way: there's a whole summer of boylove and we haven't even gotten to the end of the school year.
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 71/?
anonymous
November 24 2010, 23:23:50 UTC
I feel embarrassed commenting on this even though I know it's anon. But anyway~ just read this all in one sitting and let me tell you, it's simply amazing. At first I wasn't so sure, but it got better, eh?
I know you haven't updated in over 2 months, but I'm hoping that you haven't completely forgotten about this. I am really in love with it and I can't wait for more :) <3
Nope! I haven't forgotten! I just get really busy from around September-December since I do Nano and about every secret santa exchange I can find. I think I'm doing like, six at the moment. Craaaziness. Also I try and giftfic to a gigantic part of my flist....I think the list is something like 64 this year. Anyways, I still have something like 20k written up which needs to be cleaned and edited, I just haven't had a chance to rearrange it. Maybe I can get an update in this month since I finished Nano a couple days ago, or maybe by December. Something like that.
Wit Of The Staircase 72/?
anonymous
January 14 2011, 02:28:16 UTC
Originally, there was the actual Italian there, but I don't know a thing about Italian and figured it was better to summarize than defile the language via internet translations. Plus, to be fair, Matt doesn't know Italian either, so. Basically, he was calling Antonio a piece of shit, a son of a whore and a dick
( ... )
Part 13-14 (edited), 15-65: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=41192345#t41192345
Posting over here because it's too hard to read with the threading over there.
Sup, guys! Updates to come soon, I just need some sleep so it won't come out looking like my idea of editing involved banging my head against a keyboard.
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Matthew took up his phone, answering immediately. He didn't let it ring anymore, as only three people ever called him, and all of them were calls he didn't want to screen.
"Matthieu?"
"Yes?"
"We're going to be taking lunch in one of the classrooms this time. Mr. Edelstein's to be exact."
"Ok, I'll meet you there," he said.
Matthew took a look around before diverting from the crowd of lemmings going towards the cafeteria. He hoped Francis had cooked something, consider he hadn't brought anything and he didn't want to have to go without any food, or cut to get some.
When he came in, Mr. Edelstein was nowhere to be seen, and the group was seated in the folding chairs near the middle of the room. A big black baby grand piano was in the side of the room, because Mr. Edelstein would rather bring his own rather than have a poorly tuned old thing the school had.
"Come on, man. Hand it over," Gilbert pleaded. "She gave them to everyone but me. Not fair.Francis pulled the cupcake away and took another bite. "I'm sorry, mon ami ( ... )
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Gilbert was still muttering darkly, completely caught up in his plans to 'totally humiliate those guys in the most awesome way possible.'
"What are you going to do later, Matthieu?"
"Study. I'm so dead if I fail this math final," he replied.
"I could keep you company..."
"Nu-uh. You did that with midterms, remember? I just barely got by last time."
Matthew gave him a peck on the cheek
"Then what am I going to do tonight?" Francis said petulantly.
"You could study? It's what I'm going to be doing."
"Hmm study. I have this vision where I 'tutor' you. You're wearing a lovely Catholic schoolgirl uniform, and I have a ruler ( ... )
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Which was where it was now. Vibrating. In his pants. In the middle of class.
He fumbled for it, cheeks flaming as he hoped his practical invisibility to his classmates would extend to the cellphone as well. He couldn't answer right here, but the means seemed to only get his attention. There, right there was a text: I'm in the mens restroom, sneaking a cigarette dreaming of a tryst right in the third stall.
The thought was hot, and yet repulsive. It smelled horrible. It was one thing to do the deed in Francis' or his squeaky clean bathroom, but he couldn't even bring himself to jerk off in there when he was desperate.
Matthieu, I've got this image in my mind: I'm licking up your throat. You've pushed me against the stall. I can't get you out of your clothes fast enough. You're so hard ( ... )
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The smell of smoke smelled heavenly compared to the stench of the boy's bathroom. Urine, and what else he didn't even want to think about.
"If we get caught, we're so dead," Matthew said.
"We won't get caught," Francis said. He exhaled a cloud of smoke, and put out his cigarette, careful to douse the flame before throwing it away. Nothing like a fire to kill the mood.
They both walked to stall three, and Matthew processed the grafitti scratched and sharpied on. Katya's got nice tits! and for a good time, call Lizzie which he was pretty sure was Gilbert's handwriting. There was a heart with ACF+LV in a heart ( ... )
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"Francis-"
He was on the verge of coming. So close he could barely take it.
"F-Francis, please, I'm going to get jizz all over."
"Now we can't have that, now can we?" Francis took one more picture, then another. One zoomed out to see the desperate sex-that-isn't-really-sex-or-maybe-it-is face, and then one on his cock.
"Francis, I'm serious, let me move, I don't want to get everything dirty."
"Tsk tsk. Just have patience. I'll fix it."
He stroked Matthew's leg, and then gripped the base hard. Matthieu gasped. The pressure was intense, but for that second, he felt pushed back, delayed, if you will.
"Do you think you can last long enough to fuck me?" Francis asked.
"Probably not, there'd have to be preparation and stuff," Matthew said apologetically.
"No, you misunderstand. My mouth.""Fuck your mouth...um, how does that work ( ... )
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Francis hummed a line from La Vie En Rose, and the vibrations were wonderful. He came almost immediately, and Francis wiped at his mouth as Matthew leaned back on the stall door.
Now when he heard the song, this moment would be entwined with that first day at Francis' apartment, slightly hungover and new and hopeful. He smiled down at Francis. "I hope I didn't disappoint you."
"You're never disappointing, Matthieu," Francis said. "Well, except your clothes, but with someone like Arthur as a guide, I suppose you aren't to be blamed ( ... )
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I'm incredibly happy that Francis is starting to get the hint that maybe he doesn't want this month to be done so quickly. ... and not gonna lie, when he told Mattie to fuck his mouth I got really hot and bothered... but mostly I like it for plot! I swear! (is totally lying but really trying to be sophisticated)
AWww screw it, I LOVE IT for ALL of it. Good work, there.
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Very much loving how as much as they're trying not to fall (harder) for each other - Matthew because he knows Francis is a playboy and Francis because he enjoys being a playboy - it's happening anyway. *lols with popcorn*
Also yes, the image of Francis murmuring things in ears is hot, omnomnom...
And to any anons who can't open the end of the last thread because of stretch - try opening it in Real Player. I couldn't get it open in my Firefox or Chrome, but RP worked. o_O
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About the last comment I gave you, baw ;A; I understand you've been busy, so don't worry <3 and hdkhjjsd ok ;w; I'll add you now after I comment here. I still think I'll be a creeper, but you're so awesome -hugs back- and all of my comments are made with love to you, even when they look so dumb XD <3
(And being honest, I want this fic to last forever so the moment I'm dead and my daughter starts crying 'cause there was an update, I'll revive, read it and die again but now from happiness. Keep going on, anon ;3; you are really making an awesome thing and 60k are just a big point in the roaaad).
Now, about this update...
I think the common phrases like "have my babies", "omg I give you my life and love" and others, are nothing compared to what I feel now. Francis realizing he wants more than one month is so <3333 and God, of course everything was beyond fucking awesome. The kiss they shared made my baw and I really feel like I need to read Matt with a catholic schoolgirl uniform and Francis with a ( ... )
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I may have to write that, yes XD
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Do update, eh?
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I know you haven't updated in over 2 months, but I'm hoping that you haven't completely forgotten about this. I am really in love with it and I can't wait for more :) <3
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Nope! I haven't forgotten! I just get really busy from around September-December since I do Nano and about every secret santa exchange I can find. I think I'm doing like, six at the moment. Craaaziness. Also I try and giftfic to a gigantic part of my flist....I think the list is something like 64 this year. Anyways, I still have something like 20k written up which needs to be cleaned and edited, I just haven't had a chance to rearrange it. Maybe I can get an update in this month since I finished Nano a couple days ago, or maybe by December. Something like that.
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